Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? One quality that a successful leader must have is to make decisions quickly. When a leader takes too much time to make decisions, he will be seen as inefficient to the people he leads.

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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? One quality that a successful leader must have is to make decisions quickly. When a leader takes too much time to make decisions, he will be seen as inefficient to the people he leads.

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? One quality that a successful leader must have is to make decisions quickly. When a leader takes too much time to make decisions, he will be seen as inefficient to the people he leads.

Our society is growing so fast that our tasks usually become bigger and more complex, which makes the teamwork more essential than ever. A leader is the core of a team, who plays an important role in team management and making decisions. So the ability of the leader can directly affects the efficiency of the team.

First of all, the leader who makes decisions quickly can easily catch the opportunities. The world has never stopped changing, and chances to success are always fleeting. Let’s take the investment for example. The most beneficial way to invest is always changing. Twenty years ago, the first group of people who invested stocks in had earned a lot of money. Ten years had passed, and the first group who started the business about internet earned more, such as Tencent and Alibaba. Five years later, the situations changed again, when the housing price began to increase at an incredibly speed, so the people who invested the real estate became millionaires. The faster you figure out the situation, the bigger chance you will have to succeed. So making decisions quickly is essential for a successful leader.

Moreover, a leader needs to make decisions as swiftly as possible to keep at the forefront in the competition. People today are under the sever competitions. Not only do they compete in business, but also they compete for honor. Scientists always try to be the first one who finds the new discoveries. A few days later and the honor will not belong to you. If the leader spend too much time before starting the program, the leader’s team will be possibly fall behind and finally miss the discovery. That’s why effective leaders needs to make decisions quickly in older to become the first detector.

Besides, your teammates will lose patience during the waiting time. If you take a long time to decide, you are wasting the time of all group members. Their enthusiasm and motivation start to decrease, which leads to the inefficiency of your groups. On top of this, not only will you disappoint your group members, which damage your leadership, but also you will let your investors down. And you could even lost the fund to start the program. So making decisions quickly ensure the success of your program.

To sum it all, it is obvious that making decisions quickly is a quality that a successful leader must have. And when a leader takes too much time to make decisions, he will be seen as inefficient to the people he leads.

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Average: 7 (2 votes)
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ly affects the efficiency of the team. First of all, the leader who makes decis...
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Message: You used an adverb ('incredibly') instead an adjective, or a noun ('speed') instead of another adjective.
... the housing price began to increase at an incredibly speed, so the people who invested the real es...
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Message: The verb 'could' requires the base form of the verb: 'lose'
Suggestion: lose
...your investors down. And you could even lost the fund to start the program. So makin...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, finally, first, if, moreover, so, thus, for example, such as, first of all

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 9.8082437276 133% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 11.0286738351 145% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 43.0788530466 72% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 52.1666666667 86% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2262.0 1977.66487455 114% => OK
No of words: 466.0 407.700716846 114% => OK
Chars per words: 4.85407725322 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.64618479453 4.48103885553 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57780974076 2.67179642975 96% => OK
Unique words: 231.0 212.727598566 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.495708154506 0.524837075471 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 691.2 618.680645161 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Interrogative: 3.0 0.994623655914 302% => OK
Article: 11.0 3.08781362007 356% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 6.0 1.86738351254 321% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 30.0 20.6003584229 146% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.1344086022 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.7756720359 48.9658058833 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.4 100.406767564 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.5333333333 20.6045352989 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.13333333333 5.45110844103 57% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.53405017921 132% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 11.8709677419 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.553300970007 0.236089414692 234% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.143565540463 0.076458572812 188% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.171797333628 0.0737576698707 233% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.391319919118 0.150856017488 259% => Maybe some contents are duplicated.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.337840170277 0.0645574589148 523% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.2 11.7677419355 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 58.1214874552 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 10.1575268817 79% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.55 10.9000537634 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.77 8.01818996416 97% => OK
difficult_words: 100.0 86.8835125448 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.0537634409 80% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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