Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Only people who earn a lot of money are successful. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Success plays an important role in humans’ lives. It motivates them to keep on going with their passion or goal. Success can be defined in myriad ways. For some, success is an external concept to be measured in terms of high income, huge bank balances, fancy cars, expensive mansions, luxurious holidays and so on. However, I believe that success is more than how much money you make. Some of those measures of success include social, respect, and knowledge.
First, one of the most important indicators of success is knowledge. We all have heard a quote that ‘knowledge is power’. If a person is knowledgeable then he/she does not require money to be successful in life. For example, Abdul Kalam is a famous scientist from India. He is also former prime minister of India. He is not known because of his money but his intelligence. He belongs from a mediocre family, and after becoming a scientist; he served his country for many years. It illustrates that money does not play an important role in a person’s success.
Second, when a person gets respect from others that lead him to success in his/her life. Money does not require being respected. If a person co good for other think in benefit of others, then people start following his/her ethics. For instance, Mr. Mahatma Gandhi, took stand for Indian people to get freedom from Britishers. People believed his motives and ethics. His main two principle was truth and non-violence. People walked on his path and achieved freedom form Britishers ruling. Moreover, Martin Luther, the beloved civil rights leader in the United States of America, who adopted non-violence as the weapon of choice to help millions of African Americans fight for their rights. It can be concluded from these examples that
success can be achieved by respect from others.
Lastly, success is not all about fame and money, it could be about enjoying your work and achieve success in that work. For example, an artist does not earn much money by doing their work, but they definitely get work satisfaction. In other terms that is their success. For example, my mom is the best cook. She does not run and cooking business. She loves to cook for her loved ones. Serving great food and asking comments on her food is her definition of success.
In conclusion, each person has his/her own definition of success. Based on my experiences, I strongly believe that people can be successful in various ways such as, by earning respect, being social, and knowledge.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, lastly, moreover, second, so, then, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 15.1003584229 146% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 51.0 43.0788530466 118% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 52.1666666667 96% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2097.0 1977.66487455 106% => OK
No of words: 423.0 407.700716846 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.95744680851 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.53508145475 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6446727257 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Unique words: 238.0 212.727598566 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.562647754137 0.524837075471 107% => OK
syllable_count: 630.0 618.680645161 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 15.0 9.59856630824 156% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 32.0 20.6003584229 155% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.1344086022 65% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.3784098648 48.9658058833 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 65.53125 100.406767564 65% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.21875 20.6045352989 64% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.625 5.45110844103 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.53405017921 132% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 25.0 11.8709677419 211% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0790493457862 0.236089414692 33% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0216846259756 0.076458572812 28% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0258405585715 0.0737576698707 35% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0394582292501 0.150856017488 26% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0229373744754 0.0645574589148 36% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.5 11.7677419355 72% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.74 58.1214874552 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.1575268817 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.6 10.9000537634 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.13 8.01818996416 101% => OK
difficult_words: 103.0 86.8835125448 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 10.002688172 60% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.0537634409 72% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 3.33333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 30
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