Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
The opinions of celebrities, such as famous entertainers and athletes, are more important to younger people than they are to older people.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Is it true that the opinions of celebrities are more important to younger people than they are to older people? When it comes to this question, the answers differ from individual to individual. Some argue that the suggestions of famous people are as convincing to the young as to the old, while others believe that younger people keep those words in mind more frequently. Both the opposite arguments appear to be convincing and stand to reason, yet my personal experience and real-life observations have led me to conclude that the opinions of celebrities influence equally to all ages.
To begin with, watching TV has been a hobby or leisure activity for people of all ages. Advertisements can be seen on every channel and there is always an advertisement that is meant for a specific range of age. Besides, most of the advertisements will have celebrities presenting the products. For example, some advertisements are about trendy brands that want young people to buy their clothes, while others are about dietary supplements that see older people as their target customers. Due to the prosperous existence of advertisements, it is obvious that people of all ages are affected easily by celebrities.
Secondly, since we live in a rather complicated world, we will always face new challenges no matter what age we are in. Furthermore, when it comes to hard choices, people will naturally be asking others advice. Hence, due to the instinct of people, if someone sees a celebrities' posts on social media, they will unconsciously take the words on the posts as their suggestion to the answer. There is an example of mine, that one time I was frustrated because I could not choose which university to go to. Then, I accidentally saw my favorite singer's Instagram writing a line of lyrics to tell people to follow their hearts. Because of this, I made the right decision. Even now I grew older, I still search for some advice from social media.
In conclusion, given the reasons describe above, I strongly believe that in all ages, people will always tend to take the opinions of the celebrities they believe in. That is not to say that the other opinions are completely out of merits. Nevertheless, I believe my points of view I have provided are fully capable of firmly supporting my position.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, furthermore, hence, if, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, still, then, while, as to, for example, in conclusion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 15.1003584229 132% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 13.8261648746 36% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.0286738351 136% => OK
Pronoun: 44.0 43.0788530466 102% => OK
Preposition: 56.0 52.1666666667 107% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1917.0 1977.66487455 97% => OK
No of words: 389.0 407.700716846 95% => OK
Chars per words: 4.92802056555 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44106776838 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86141925355 2.67179642975 107% => OK
Unique words: 215.0 212.727598566 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.552699228792 0.524837075471 105% => OK
syllable_count: 613.8 618.680645161 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 3.51792114695 199% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.0419318332 48.9658058833 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.894736842 100.406767564 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4736842105 20.6045352989 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.21052631579 5.45110844103 132% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.88709677419 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.264251846134 0.236089414692 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0773413718241 0.076458572812 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.100443936007 0.0737576698707 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.159068479164 0.150856017488 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0820085167774 0.0645574589148 127% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 11.7677419355 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 58.1214874552 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.31 10.9000537634 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.48 8.01818996416 106% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 86.8835125448 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 10.002688172 140% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.0 Out of 30
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