Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
In order to be well-informed, a person must get information from many different news resources.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
When it comes to the issue that the person must get information from many different resources to be well informed, some people may agree with this idea and give us sound reasons for their beliefs. On the other hand, some other people might disagree and have different opinions. Also, those opponents could provide us with strong purposes to support their thoughts. I believe that the person must get information from many different resources to be well informed because there are so many reasons. This short essay will demonstrate some points regarding my point of view in the following paragraph:
First of all, in my opinion, it is widely understood that the technology today developed very rapidly. So, today everyone can easily get information from different sources. For instance: the internet and the countless number of the television channels. However, depending on single way to get the information will limit our knowledge and prosperity.
Another point why I advocate that the person must get information from different resources is the highly spread of untrusted sources. The information today may be dispersed my untrusted sources. So, the people must hear the news from more than one source to avoid the misleading by untrusted sources. On the other hand, depending on single source will concentrate the person’s attention on just few things.
Finally, it is a well-established fact that learning from different sources has great consequences on our personality. Reading for different writers improve our writing ability and that has good impact on our behavior. However, reading for single writer will make as imitating him without add our touch.
From what has been discussed above, we may draw a conclusion, which says that, people who hold opposite idea may have the right to believe in that, but my opinion and other people opinions, are overwhelmingly too much to be ignored.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 70, Rule ID: NUMEROUS_DIFFERENT[1]
Message: Use simply 'many'.
Suggestion: many
...at the person must get information from many different resources to be well informed, some peo...
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Line 1, column 418, Rule ID: NUMEROUS_DIFFERENT[1]
Message: Use simply 'many'.
Suggestion: many
...at the person must get information from many different resources to be well informed because t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, however, if, may, regarding, so, well, for instance, first of all, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 9.8082437276 153% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 13.8261648746 51% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 43.0788530466 72% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 52.1666666667 69% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1608.0 1977.66487455 81% => OK
No of words: 307.0 407.700716846 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.23778501629 4.8611393121 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18585898806 4.48103885553 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77327084948 2.67179642975 104% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 212.727598566 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.550488599349 0.524837075471 105% => OK
syllable_count: 490.5 618.680645161 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.5006313091 48.9658058833 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.5 100.406767564 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1875 20.6045352989 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.875 5.45110844103 144% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.278720531005 0.236089414692 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0940679629912 0.076458572812 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0977349178636 0.0737576698707 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.135616637843 0.150856017488 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.108548386429 0.0645574589148 168% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 11.7677419355 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 58.1214874552 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.11 10.9000537634 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.02 8.01818996416 100% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 86.8835125448 77% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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