Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? In order to be well-informed, a person must get information from many different news resources.
as people regard news and other issues related to the world such as political issue, invironmental and so on, as an esential part of their life more and more, where and how they can recieve reliable news become a controversial topic among the people. in this regard, some people hold the view that to get reliable information must rely on various sources of news, while others have oppisite view and say one news resource is better than several ones. in my view of point, the former point carrier more weight and I will try to examine below the specific reasons for this purpose.
the first reason which should be stated here is that more information sources resemble a dynamic map. How? in the world there are numerous difficulties and troublesome situations that we have to explore them and reach noticable results. as many both news readers and viewers confess, it took long time to find appropriate way realizing the events over different subject. I think various resources of news can equipe news readers and viewers with insightful view over different subjecs and rewarding experience to resolving challenges related to those subjec. when I think about invironmental issue and desert expantion over the world, for example, I think environment degrated alarmingly and desert expanded rapidly but never had realized how experts eagerly try to curb environmental degration and desert expantion untile I saw famous documentary filme about these issues.
another point that deserves some words is that discriminating choice of news are very important. our life has gone through great changes since science and technology has came to being over the world. obvuoisly, there will be more innovation, invention and researches in different feild of science and technology such as advanced telecomunication by new generation of satelite. so, as I mentioned, discriminating choices of news could enrich people's view, make them feel more informed, and fullfil their comunication with other or forien comunication.
in conclution, taking all in to account, although, there are more advantages in various news resources, we must use them not only as a map, but also improve our information.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, so, while, for example, i think, such as, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 15.1003584229 60% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 13.8261648746 152% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 27.0 43.0788530466 63% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 52.1666666667 77% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.0752688172 211% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1854.0 1977.66487455 94% => OK
No of words: 352.0 407.700716846 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.26704545455 4.8611393121 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33147354134 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83356864173 2.67179642975 106% => OK
Unique words: 218.0 212.727598566 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.619318181818 0.524837075471 118% => OK
syllable_count: 579.6 618.680645161 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 20.6003584229 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.1344086022 134% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 60.6441751229 48.9658058833 124% => OK
Chars per sentence: 142.615384615 100.406767564 142% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.0769230769 20.6045352989 131% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.69230769231 5.45110844103 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 5.5376344086 235% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.151392494441 0.236089414692 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0536180466562 0.076458572812 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0373228757165 0.0737576698707 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0899091492345 0.150856017488 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00817523538558 0.0645574589148 13% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.9 11.7677419355 144% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 58.1214874552 76% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 10.1575268817 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.58 10.9000537634 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.24 8.01818996416 115% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 86.8835125448 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 10.002688172 180% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.0537634409 127% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.247311828 137% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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