Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? In order to be well-informed, a person must get information from many different news resources. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Well-informed individuals are an essential part of our society. Nowadays, various events occur throughout the world that be covered with different news Agency. Some people believe that everyone should use of any news resources to acquire information in order to be well-informed, however, others hold the opposite view. In my opinion, numerous news resources help to anyone to obtain more information and become well-informed, for noticeable reasons.
The main reason is that any news resources inform a biased aspect of any topic. Unfortunately, governments restrict news resources that give revealing information about its inefficiency and corruption. however, with various news resources such as CNN, BBC, NYT, social networking, newspaper, and the like, weaknesses management of governments reveal to society, and gradually people get aware of objective side of news. Therefor, everyone should not just merely rely on one news resource to become well-aware. For example, I work in CNN which depend on government extremely and cover news in predefined directions. Especially during the presidential election, this program should try to demonstrate only efficiency and positive aspect of governments in order to persuade individuals to vote for again government, while other news resources belong other candidates want to inform of negative aspect government. Unfairly, government limit activity of its opposition news resources so as not to reveal its weakness to public. As a results, people would not recognize these weakness unless use of various news resources, and so vote fairly without non-partisan. As you can see, individuals should use any type news resources to obtain more information.
The another reason is that using any way news resources help people to distinguish valid information. any news resource cover selective information under supervision states. In other words, individuals should investigate all news resources to be informed from community status. In most countries there are many news resources that inform people, but a little resources give accurate information. Particulary, media that belong governments may broadcast fault data in order to change individual's thought. Although a few unknowing person who use limited media believe any type information, but most of people have knowledge to apply new news resuorces to contrast datas and get more valid information. For instance, in my countries, government leaders try to defraud ignorant people to rule for many years. however, with expanding the Internet, individuals by using Telegram and Facebook can get more information about fake information. this experience teach me that everybody should use a lot lof news resources to become well-informed.
In conclusion, people by using innumerable news media and resources to obtain more data because not only be informed secret information, but also recognize valid information. person should not depend on a few news resources, if they want to become more well-informed.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: However
... about its inefficiency and corruption. however, with various news resources such as CN...
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Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a result' or simply 'results'?
Suggestion: a result; results
...ot to reveal its weakness to public. As a results, people would not recognize these weakn...
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Message: Did you mean 'this weakness' or 'these weaknesses'?
Suggestion: this weakness; these weaknesses
...s a results, people would not recognize these weakness unless use of various news resources, a...
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Suggestion: Any
...eople to distinguish valid information. any news resource cover selective informati...
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Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the people') or simply say ''most people''.
Suggestion: most of the people; most people
...media believe any type information, but most of people have knowledge to apply new news resuor...
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Suggestion: However
...ignorant people to rule for many years. however, with expanding the Internet, individua...
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Suggestion: Person
..., but also recognize valid information. person should not depend on a few news resourc...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, so, well, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as a result, in my opinion, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 15.1003584229 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 43.0788530466 49% => OK
Preposition: 61.0 52.1666666667 117% => OK
Nominalization: 24.0 8.0752688172 297% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2565.0 1977.66487455 130% => OK
No of words: 454.0 407.700716846 111% => OK
Chars per words: 5.64977973568 4.8611393121 116% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.61598047577 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.09373132543 2.67179642975 116% => OK
Unique words: 226.0 212.727598566 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.497797356828 0.524837075471 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 817.2 618.680645161 132% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.51630824373 119% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.59856630824 31% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 6.0 1.86738351254 321% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.6003584229 117% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.8729353935 48.9658058833 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.875 100.406767564 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.9166666667 20.6045352989 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.79166666667 5.45110844103 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.5376344086 144% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 11.8709677419 42% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.85842293907 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 12.0 4.88709677419 246% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.23376319051 0.236089414692 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0850524188142 0.076458572812 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0394984127518 0.0737576698707 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.181909604558 0.150856017488 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0352649434101 0.0645574589148 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 11.7677419355 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.28 58.1214874552 62% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 10.1575268817 125% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.49 10.9000537634 142% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.46 8.01818996416 106% => OK
difficult_words: 113.0 86.8835125448 130% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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