Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? People benefit more from traveling in their own country than from traveling to foreign countries.
Traveling is very beneficial for today's stressful life. Nowadays, people involve with a lot of works, and they suffer extreme pressure in their life, so journeying is helpful to recovery themselves. some people believe that touring to foreign countries is more advantageous for individuals than in own country, although some others hold an opposite opinion. In my view, everyone gains more benefit by traveling abroad for two noticeable reasons.
The main reason is that people get more experience by traveling to new countries. Everybody run into various matters in their lifetime, but how manage their issues to depend on level of empirical knowledge directly. Therefore, individuals by journeying to foreign countries face diverse event and get more experience. For example, when I went to Canada for PHD, I had a lot of problem because I never had gone to another country. Unfortunately, the first time, as I arrived at Canada and took a taxi, driver cheated me about one thousand dollars. Sadly, this event turned my pleasure for traveling to foreign country into anxiety. However, I could acquire new experience not just how should handle my problems but also who could trust. If I had traveled to many foreign countries early, I never would have met with problem. this experience taught me, traveling to foreign country have positive effect in life of people.
Another reason is that traveling to foreign countries assists individuals to become social. people, in spite of progressing technology, are often shy to communicate with other people. one of the best way to promote socially is that traveling to new countries; In other words, dealing with various country’s people help how to associate. For instance, statistics show that everybody traveling, especially overseas, treat friendly and sociable. when people go to new country, they can find new friends who have particular culture and tradition. In addition, traveling to foreign country increase individual’s self-confidence how handle unexpected social situations due to the fact they meet a lot of persons or collide with diverse circumstance such as purchasing, finding ways, get lodging, and so forth. On the other hand, numerous foreign traveling might influence on personality of travelers, and so this effect could make challenging issues in their own country how to communicate sociability. Surprisingly, researchers demonstrate advantage socially of international travel is too much greater than its harm. As you can see, traveling aboard benefit individuals significantly.
In conclusion, traveling to foreign country cause to people acquire more profit. Not only does it increase individual’s experience, but also it lead to become social. All people should travel to new nation with different culture.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, so, therefore, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as, in my view, in other words, in spite of, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 15.1003584229 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 43.0788530466 74% => OK
Preposition: 59.0 52.1666666667 113% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.0752688172 136% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2385.0 1977.66487455 121% => OK
No of words: 434.0 407.700716846 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.49539170507 4.8611393121 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.56428161445 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.04670336759 2.67179642975 114% => OK
Unique words: 239.0 212.727598566 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.55069124424 0.524837075471 105% => OK
syllable_count: 738.0 618.680645161 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.86738351254 268% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 20.6003584229 121% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 44.3968647542 48.9658058833 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.4 100.406767564 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.36 20.6045352989 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.72 5.45110844103 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.5376344086 144% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.333222901777 0.236089414692 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.104100074578 0.076458572812 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0734742366432 0.0737576698707 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.227514613907 0.150856017488 151% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0180141781729 0.0645574589148 28% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 11.7677419355 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 58.1214874552 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.32 10.9000537634 131% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.66 8.01818996416 108% => OK
difficult_words: 115.0 86.8835125448 132% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 81.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.5 Out of 30
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