Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
In order to succeed in study or job, the ability to ajust or adapt to changing conduction or circumstance is more important than having excellent knowledge.
Chasing success is regarded as one of the most important goals by students and employees, and they have come up with many vital factors helping them make it. Nowadays a new discussion over whether the ability to adjust to various environments or professional knowledge are more essential. In my opinion, people who acquire perfect storage of knowledge are easier to fulfill their goals.
Some claim that study and working conditions and environment are restrictions for people, only can they succeed if they could adapt to the circumstance. After being familiar with conditions, people can then perform themselves and manage to succeed. It is true that conditions have influence on people’s success, but they are not decisive factors. Bias from others or uncomfortable temperature of studying or working places are all serious conditions, but none of them can decide people’s achievements. It is always people’s knowledge and professional skills that help them go through all environmental difficulties and pursue their dreams.
Firstly, students who acquire complete knowledge system can perform perfect during exams. According to the newest research from Peking University, more than eighty percent of top students who used to get full marks indicate that they have experienced tough examination conditions and were not influenced, because all of them have mastered enough knowledge. From the survey we can conclude that student’s memories and learned skills will not be lost because of external circumstances, meaning that the bad environment cannot be excuse for students’ failed exams. For instance, my brother has studied English for several months to prepare for IELTS. He recited the meaning of every word and could communicate fluently with foreigners. The day of IELTS came, he was notified that the air condition of his classroom was damaged. In the hot classroom, without being affected by negative complaints or applications to change classroom from other testers, he focused on his questions and finished quickly and got full marks. He succeeded because of his brilliant English level, instead of adapting to the environment.
Meanwhile, professional skills are more significant for employees to earn money. It is universal that responsibilities of all kinds of jobs are to deal with work using professional skills, rather than thinking about how to please leaders or change uncomfortable working environments. To be more specific, employees earn money because of their labor, instead of their flatters to their bosses. For instance, my mother used to be a doctor. Her salary consisted of fundamental salary and bonus according to the recovery of her patients. If she wanted to make more money or get promotion, what she should do was practicing her medical skills and cured more people, which had nothing to do with the environment of the hospital or bias from her leaders.
In conclusion, for students, thorough understanding of testing contents is vital to get higher score, for employees, professional skills are keys to earn money and get promoted. So that is why I disagree with the statement.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, so, then, while, for instance, in conclusion, in my opinion, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 15.1003584229 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 13.8261648746 145% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 45.0 43.0788530466 104% => OK
Preposition: 65.0 52.1666666667 125% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.0752688172 136% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2484.0 1977.66487455 126% => OK
No of words: 468.0 407.700716846 115% => OK
Chars per words: 5.30769230769 4.8611393121 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.65116196802 4.48103885553 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89491040378 2.67179642975 108% => OK
Unique words: 249.0 212.727598566 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.532051282051 0.524837075471 101% => OK
syllable_count: 738.0 618.680645161 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.1553880564 48.9658058833 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.0 100.406767564 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.347826087 20.6045352989 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.5652173913 5.45110844103 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 18.0 11.8709677419 152% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.17599430727 0.236089414692 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0505103403788 0.076458572812 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0431000243173 0.0737576698707 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0938910461318 0.150856017488 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0251871540415 0.0645574589148 39% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 11.7677419355 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 58.1214874552 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.52 10.9000537634 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.98 8.01818996416 112% => OK
difficult_words: 129.0 86.8835125448 148% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.247311828 137% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 83.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 25.0 Out of 30
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