Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Our current way of life will have a negative impact on future generations.
Life the precious thing that living being gets. Our every stept descides the future of our life. I totally agree the stand that our current way of life will have a negative impact on the future generations. Human beings have being evolved and made their life easy as compared to the previous generation with the help of technology and intellegence. But the evolution had bought many problems with it. And the problems will a great trouble to our off spring or the up comming generation.
When humans didnt have technologies they would do physical work and that work would keep them healthy. But now a days, For eg. We have transport facilities to travel from one place to another. Even we dont have to climb the staires to reach our homes because we have lifes. Due to this facilities the movement of the body has reduced as compared to previous time. And caused many problems of Obbesity, Blood Pressure etc. all this problems are caused because now a days people do want to take efforts to do something. And this ease of life cause more effects on todays generation. People start suffring form Heart attacks from very early age like 20s, and previously people would suffer it at age of 50. The difference caused if because of the change in dite. Previously people would eat healthy food but todays generation preffer to eat junk food. This change in Diet has also caused many other problems also.
Increase in use of smart phones at very early ages cause eye problems to childres. But childrens cant be blamed fully because our current life style has changed. And phone ahe became very essentatial to us. Students use phone to lear new thing, to explore themself and much more, but the over use have caused problems of mental stress. Previously children would play games on the grounds, where there body would get proper exersice which is needed. But today there are no grounds left to play. For advancement purpose all the open grounds are converted into big buildinds or malls. So childrens have to sit at home. And the same, phone in hand and start playing games online.
Advancement has caused many changes in life, but they have bought problems also. The problmems that are affecting the future generation. And if we dont pay attentaion on this now it will be like a slow poision for the future. At the old days some people would corss 100 age also, But today is it possible?. Ofcourese not, nowadays people cross 70 will be great achivement. All this are the worse effects of current way of life we live. We will enjoy it till a certain time but the next generation will suffer it very badly.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...the up comming generation. When humans didnt have technologies they would do physica...
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... that work would keep them healthy. But now a days, For eg. We have transport facilities t...
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...our homes because we have lifes. Due to this facilities the movement of the body has...
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...ms of Obbesity, Blood Pressure etc. all this problems are caused because now a days ...
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...c. all this problems are caused because now a days people do want to take efforts to do so...
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...iet has also caused many other problems also. Increase in use of smart phones at ve...
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...eye problems to childres. But childrens cant be blamed fully because our current lif...
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... in life, but they have bought problems also. The problmems that are affecting the f...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 9.8082437276 133% => OK
Conjunction : 23.0 13.8261648746 166% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 34.0 43.0788530466 79% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 52.1666666667 102% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.0752688172 161% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2144.0 1977.66487455 108% => OK
No of words: 460.0 407.700716846 113% => OK
Chars per words: 4.66086956522 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.6311565067 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.33356781611 2.67179642975 87% => OK
Unique words: 237.0 212.727598566 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.515217391304 0.524837075471 98% => OK
syllable_count: 668.7 618.680645161 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 14.0 1.86738351254 750% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 34.0 20.6003584229 165% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.1344086022 65% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 26.9194781617 48.9658058833 55% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 63.0588235294 100.406767564 63% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.5294117647 20.6045352989 66% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.5 5.45110844103 9% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 5.5376344086 235% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 3.85842293907 285% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.88709677419 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.24633340496 0.236089414692 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0609035864052 0.076458572812 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0938151959978 0.0737576698707 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.175363415407 0.150856017488 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.131774469962 0.0645574589148 204% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.3 11.7677419355 62% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.74 58.1214874552 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.1575268817 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.16 10.9000537634 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.06 8.01818996416 88% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 86.8835125448 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.0537634409 72% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.247311828 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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