Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Parents are the best teachers. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
The teachers ae the building blocks of society, which provides the students with proper guidance in order to become a successful person in their life. Personally, I believe parents are the best instructors of their children. I feel this way for two reasons, which I will explore in the following essay.
First of all, when a baby is born, he or she is taken great care from parents. The basics of life such as walking, uttering the first word from the mouth, initially from crawling to walking and understanding various relations among people, are taught by parents. Furthermore, the essentials of behaviour, social and moral skills, to differentiate between good or bad, right or wrong, are deep-rooted to the mind by the parents. My personal experience is a compelling example of this.
Secondly, as a kid, my parents educated me about various skills from their experience and knowledge. I liked to paint, so my parents assessed my interest and encouraged me to pursue my career in art and craft paint. In school, there were so many children, sometimes the teachers were not able to concentrate fully on every student. In this way, the talent of some students got hidden. But my parents imparted their role and after scrutinizing my talent, lead me in picking my career.
In the end, it can be concluded that the parents undoubtedly, portray themselves in instructing their children and act as the best source to enhance their growth.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, if, second, secondly, so, i feel, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 15.1003584229 60% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 9.8082437276 20% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.0286738351 36% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 29.0 43.0788530466 67% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 52.1666666667 69% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1202.0 1977.66487455 61% => OK
No of words: 244.0 407.700716846 60% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.9262295082 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.95227774224 4.48103885553 88% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7567439479 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 212.727598566 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.631147540984 0.524837075471 120% => OK
syllable_count: 358.2 618.680645161 58% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 20.6003584229 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.7858728711 48.9658058833 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.4615384615 100.406767564 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7692307692 20.6045352989 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.15384615385 5.45110844103 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0731945998022 0.236089414692 31% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0287822274626 0.076458572812 38% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0295726440647 0.0737576698707 40% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0484667667049 0.150856017488 32% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0267552341611 0.0645574589148 41% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 11.7677419355 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 58.1214874552 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.31 10.9000537634 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.48 8.01818996416 106% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 86.8835125448 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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