Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Parents are the best teachers. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Parents are the very important and quintessential parts of our life. The importance of their presence, contribution and devotion to build and make up a good and an exemplary individual is undeniable. They are the format, what we are and what we ought to be. Parents are the best guide, some would agree, others would be disagree with the statement. In my view, parents as a teacher is always the best for the following two important reason.
The first reason is that, parent helps to build our moral foundation. When we were very childhood stage in our life, we all passing each and every time close to our parents, they taught us what to do, what should we avoid, how to treat others, how to behave in a right and humane way. For example, when I was in my childhood, I had spent my time mostly close to them. We lived in a remote village of Bangladesh, there was no electricity, no better transportation availability. So on that stage, my father took my hand to go to the school along with him. And in house my mother spent her time to preparing food for us. Later in my life, I am now a father, these moments helps and reminds me always to treat my sons in the same way, how to spare time for them, how to loves them. This undoubtedly in important lesson for me, as they made me as a complete individual. If these would not happened, I am literally devoid to learn this important lesson in my life. As you can see that my parent devotion helped me to teach how to behave with my children in a moral way.
Another reason is that, without parent guidelines, none can get the real joy of his/her life and in lieu they suffers a great depression. A study has been published by a well-known organization and they stated that, the children who are berated from parent’s care, later life they have a more chance to involve themselves in different vices acts. For instance, when I was worked in a multinational company, named Beximco, I saw many employee were missed their in time duty and often they were in sullen mood. One day I asked one of the employee about their reason. All of a sudden, they said, they are depressed because, their memories hurt them. Further study showed that, their family background was in disheveled state and their parent were not in good relation and in many case their parent were separated. As a result they are depressed, malingerer and not in good mood to work. This experience taught me that if the parent were not in good relation, their children are often have greater chance different psychological problems.
In sum, some would oppose with me although under parental surveillance child would learn the best lesson. This helps not only build child inner milieu but also helps him/her to develop as a complete and humane individual. Hence, children should learn from their parent to boost their implicit and also explicit learning.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 885, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'would' requires the base form of the verb: 'happen'
Suggestion: happen
...complete individual. If these would not happened, I am literally devoid to learn this im...
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Line 3, column 960, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...learn this important lesson in my life. As you can see that my parent devotion hel...
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Line 3, column 1049, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a moral way" with adverb for "moral"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...to teach how to behave with my children in a moral way. Another reason is that, without par...
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Line 5, column 111, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[2]
Message: The pronoun 'they' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'suffer'
Suggestion: suffer
...al joy of his/her life and in lieu they suffers a great depression. A study has been pu...
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Line 5, column 429, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun employee seems to be countable; consider using: 'many employees'.
Suggestion: many employees
...inational company, named Beximco, I saw many employee were missed their in time duty and ofte...
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Line 5, column 773, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun case seems to be countable; consider using: 'many cases'.
Suggestion: many cases
...parent were not in good relation and in many case their parent were separated. As a resul...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, if, so, well, for example, for instance, as a result, in my view, in the same way
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 25.0 15.1003584229 166% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 13.8261648746 130% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 81.0 43.0788530466 188% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 61.0 52.1666666667 117% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.0752688172 173% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2365.0 1977.66487455 120% => OK
No of words: 512.0 407.700716846 126% => OK
Chars per words: 4.619140625 4.8611393121 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.75682846001 4.48103885553 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56314227731 2.67179642975 96% => OK
Unique words: 249.0 212.727598566 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.486328125 0.524837075471 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 737.1 618.680645161 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 18.0 9.59856630824 188% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 3.51792114695 199% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 20.6003584229 126% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.3716736016 48.9658058833 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.9615384615 100.406767564 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6923076923 20.6045352989 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.07692307692 5.45110844103 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 11.8709677419 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.122091764897 0.236089414692 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0399865170299 0.076458572812 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0584060243091 0.0737576698707 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0909109658694 0.150856017488 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0596647557366 0.0645574589148 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 11.7677419355 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 58.1214874552 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 10.1575268817 82% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.52 10.9000537634 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.54 8.01818996416 94% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 86.8835125448 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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