Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Parents are the best teachers. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Parents are the firstly met and most influential people for a child in her/his life. While growing up, the children try to learn new things from their parents, and the parents support them to explore the world around them. However, they may have many teachers during their lives, the parents are the first and most effective teachers since the beginning. I would say parents are the best teachers without any hesitation because of some critical reasons I will explain later.
Firstly, we know from recent studies that permanent learning occurs by emotional learning. Emotional learning means building a sensual bond when experiencing and trying to understand something new. As the children connected their parents with strong emotional bonds, they can feel more emotion if their parents teach them. This situation makes the parents the best teachers as a consequence of emotional learning creates permanent memories. For instance, I still remember my childhood as a vivid scene of how I learned the traffic signs. Whenever we were on the road, my father was trying to teach the signs funnily, and I was feeling so happy; that’s why I learned them by heart.
Besides, the children learn by mimetic. They observe their parents when they are doing or saying something then copy their behaviors. To shed light on it, take my son, for example, he is five years old, and he mimics me daily. I’m a doctor, and he tries to behave like me; he imagines that he is a doctor and doing movements similar to physical examinations on his teddy bears like a doctor. It shows how the children learn how to apply some procedure via watching their parents and mimicking them correctly.
In conclusion, kids can learn things in so many ways; emotions and mimicking are the tools they often use when learning. Both of these techniques are efficient, and similarly, parents are the first people the children share these experience types with. These reasons I wrote supports why I agree the parents are the best teachers for a child. They could teach anything better than anyone.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, first, firstly, however, if, may, similarly, so, still, then, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 51.0 43.0788530466 118% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 52.1666666667 61% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1723.0 1977.66487455 87% => OK
No of words: 347.0 407.700716846 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.96541786744 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31600926901 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47776280613 2.67179642975 93% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 212.727598566 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.564841498559 0.524837075471 108% => OK
syllable_count: 504.9 618.680645161 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 15.0 9.59856630824 156% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.86738351254 268% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.6389030853 48.9658058833 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.6842105263 100.406767564 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2631578947 20.6045352989 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.21052631579 5.45110844103 114% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.161078497868 0.236089414692 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0546576032694 0.076458572812 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0695470988662 0.0737576698707 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.111013927134 0.150856017488 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0548585760971 0.0645574589148 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 11.7677419355 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 58.1214874552 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.55 10.9000537634 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.85 8.01818996416 98% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 86.8835125448 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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