Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Parents today are more involved in their children’s education than were parents in the past.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
The issue of children's education has always been a topic of focus in our society, especially in the recent years as the living standard improves, which renders less attention in basic needs. In this token, it is widely accepted that parents participate more actively in the course of fostering offsprings nowadays than they did before. This statement is in accordance with my own perspective and I will elaborate my reasons for endorsing it.
First and foremost, it is of no doubt that parents spend more money in cultivating youngsters. Ever since the child is born, parents in this modern society is questing for as various opportunities as possible to provide a promising learning environment for him or her. More often than not we find children in kindergarten attending countless after-school curriculum, to name a few, piano class, calligraphy class, swimming class and singing class. Not to mention the number of courses elder children in primary or high school take. All these lessons cost parents a fortune every year, and years in the future which might continue even their children are enrolled in universities since they are likely to pursue further education as graduate or PHD students. While in the past, since most families can barely make the basic needs for food and clothing meet, there is no spare money for such luxury expense, children's education.
Another aspect parents devote themselves in their kids' education is that they spend an increasing amount of time with children compared to the situation decades ago. As illustrated in the last paragraph, children in the current age take much more extra classes than their counterparts had the to before. This virtually substantiates that parents currently dedicate more time to adolescents cultivation than parents in the past did. To be more specific, they need to escort children forth and back towards the spot for extra courses; some of the worried parents are probably to stay in the class with their children in case they need help or feel lonely. Besides, parents are also taking an active part in the school's tasks to take children to explore the world outside for the sake of their all-round development.
To put it in a nutshell, due to the advancement of our society, parents today are able to devote more with respect to money and time than parents in the past, which explains why I support this statement.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 533, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...ack towards the spot for extra courses; some of the worried parents are probably to stay in...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, first, if, so, while, no doubt, of course, with respect to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 34.0 43.0788530466 79% => OK
Preposition: 62.0 52.1666666667 119% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.0752688172 173% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1995.0 1977.66487455 101% => OK
No of words: 398.0 407.700716846 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.01256281407 4.8611393121 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.46653527281 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67267838833 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Unique words: 224.0 212.727598566 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.562814070352 0.524837075471 107% => OK
syllable_count: 616.5 618.680645161 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.1344086022 129% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 41.9600868551 48.9658058833 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 133.0 100.406767564 132% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.5333333333 20.6045352989 129% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.86666666667 5.45110844103 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.28842305291 0.236089414692 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.101752617215 0.076458572812 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0612298551908 0.0737576698707 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.194235949113 0.150856017488 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0590027222558 0.0645574589148 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 11.7677419355 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 58.1214874552 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.1575268817 121% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 10.9000537634 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.85 8.01818996416 110% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 86.8835125448 114% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.0537634409 123% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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