Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Parents today are more involved in their children's education than parents were in the past.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
A controversial issue relating to whether parents are involved in their children's education more than before, has brought to the attention of public. Relevant people believe that children are exposed to new technology, which helps them more than a parent would help them. However, in my opinion, parents nowadays play an important role on young adults education.
First off, in this time and age, parents are involved more in their children's education because they see and understand that a high level of education would help them in the foreseeable future. Also, they want their kids to succeed and not fail. Nevertheless, some parents do not have this knowledge and do not pay attention to their children's learning. For example, my grandparents, never took seriously the education of my parents. On the contrary, two decades ago, when I finished high school, my parents had a huge influence on my chosen university. They wanted to pay for my education, and wanted me to choose the best college in town. Even though they had to sacrifice for making the money by working two full-time jobs, they never regraded because their priority was my education before anything else. Today, that I am a parent myself, I have realized how important is to invest in child's education. If my parents did not have the understanding of a good education, i might not have had the chance to attend such a prestigious university, which actually helped me to become a successful person in my chosen career.
Furthermore, nowadays with the development of digital devices parents are more informed and they want for their children to have the chance to try all the opportunities that are available. Parents not only encourage their children to take further steps in education, but also financially support them, compare that with parents in the past, who did not have access to sources that today are available to everyone who is interested in. For instance, evidence has revealed that in present-days society is more involved in improvement of education system. Moreover, the government has build up an entire team, which has developed new strategies for better educational system. Parents play a crucial role on this program. As a result, they are part of this improvement that has taken place in present age.
In conclusion, parents should play an important role in their children's education. This is because they understand better the significance of being educated. And because nowadays they are highly informed and they are part of the team who has developed strategies for a better education system.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 346, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'adults'' or 'adult's'?
Suggestion: adults'; adult's
...owadays play an important role on young adults education. First off, in this time a...
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Line 3, column 974, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
... the understanding of a good education, i might not have had the chance to attend...
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Line 3, column 1115, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to career'
Suggestion: to career
...become a successful person in my chosen career. Furthermore, nowadays with the develo...
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, first, furthermore, however, if, moreover, nevertheless, so, for example, for instance, in conclusion, as a result, in my opinion, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.0286738351 136% => OK
Pronoun: 51.0 43.0788530466 118% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 52.1666666667 102% => OK
Nominalization: 23.0 8.0752688172 285% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2169.0 1977.66487455 110% => OK
No of words: 426.0 407.700716846 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.09154929577 4.8611393121 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.54310108192 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80657045316 2.67179642975 105% => OK
Unique words: 205.0 212.727598566 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.481220657277 0.524837075471 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 687.6 618.680645161 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.3385542697 48.9658058833 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.285714286 100.406767564 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2857142857 20.6045352989 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.95238095238 5.45110844103 146% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 19.0 11.8709677419 160% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.254645633169 0.236089414692 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0870026995556 0.076458572812 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0735163369358 0.0737576698707 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.176481685686 0.150856017488 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0625123414231 0.0645574589148 97% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 11.7677419355 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 58.1214874552 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.24 10.9000537634 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.85 8.01818996416 98% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 86.8835125448 100% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 10.002688172 115% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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