Education has been a substantial part of everyone's lives since children learn most of their life lessons through the education system which further enhances their personal as well as their professional development. In this regard, some people think that people nowadays are more concerned about their children's studies than in the past. However, others take it as an exaggeration and hold an opposite standpoint. From my vantage point, the former view contains more weight. I take the position on account for the following reasons.
The first thing that makes me hold the belief that parents nowadays are more educated than earlier time and that is the one reason that encourages parents to educate their children too. Additionally, many parents do relate it with their fame in society because if their children earn higher education and become a doctor or pilot, it would enrich their social status in the community. On the contrary, in the past days, parents used to believe in living a simple and ordinary lifestyle that did not ask for higher education from their children. Drawing from my own father's example, my father is a doctor in his profession, and as a result of that, I have been growing old seeing him working hard in his profession. Also, from my childhood, he always pushed me hard to work hard and achieve a higher education like him. Therefore, had I not been encouraged by my father's goal and motivation, I could not complete my medical degree following high school.
Another equally noteworthy point is that in the last few decades, the economical standards of the individual human being's have been improved a lot. On that ground, parents have to invest a colossal of money in order to serve their children a higher education which has become possible due to having a good job standard and earning a fair amount of salaries through it. Additionally, parents today have fewer kids than in the past, so they are able to focus on each kid at a time. For instance, I am an only child in my family, so my parents put all their efforts into educating me well. In fact, I went to a private school to attend high school, and later on, I pursued my higher studies from abroad. On the contrary, when my mom was young since she had seven siblings, his parents did not effort to provide a higher standard of living as well as education to each kid. As a result, parents in the past were not involved in their children's education because they had too many kids to look after.
Admittedly, there are evident facts that parents at current days do care about their children's education, however, it is not true for every parent. In current days, since both parents are working and they usually have to spend more than ten hours daily at their workplace, it becomes hard for them to tackle their children's education. Hence, some children are lacking in their studies even though they are bright and intelligent students.
All in all, contemplating all remarks, I strongly believe that people today are more dedicated to their children's education than in the past. This is because having fewer kids in the family gives time to parents to focus on their children and because modern families are concerned about their reputation in the community which they can gain if their children pursue higher education.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, hence, however, if, look, so, therefore, well, for instance, in fact, as a result, as well as, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 15.1003584229 132% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.0286738351 136% => OK
Pronoun: 73.0 43.0788530466 169% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 79.0 52.1666666667 151% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 8.0752688172 223% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2755.0 1977.66487455 139% => OK
No of words: 569.0 407.700716846 140% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.84182776801 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.88402711743 4.48103885553 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52395713457 2.67179642975 94% => OK
Unique words: 278.0 212.727598566 131% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.488576449912 0.524837075471 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 854.1 618.680645161 138% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.59856630824 146% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.94265232975 202% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.1344086022 119% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.979684072 48.9658058833 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.782608696 100.406767564 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.7391304348 20.6045352989 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.34782608696 5.45110844103 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.88709677419 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.382276116233 0.236089414692 162% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.11916357636 0.076458572812 156% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0919115738233 0.0737576698707 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.235521519179 0.150856017488 156% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0248427027327 0.0645574589148 38% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 11.7677419355 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 58.1214874552 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.1575268817 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.09 10.9000537634 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.02 8.01818996416 100% => OK
difficult_words: 115.0 86.8835125448 132% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.0537634409 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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