Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? In the past, it was easier to identify what type of career or job would lead to a secure and successful future.
Undoubtedly, finding and commencing a job is an evitable and crucial juncture in the life of most people because leading a gratifying life is not feasible without a decent job in today's world. Indeed, people select the diverse procedure in finding their ideal jobs. Various points of view which are germane to the matter being discussed brings us to the moot question as to whether in the past it was easier to become successful at any given job. However, the popular sentiment to which I vehemently cling is that nowadays people run into huge problems when they want to run a business and they have to face different barriers than past years. The underlying aim of this essay is to put forward some cogent reasons to shed light on a number of issues in this framework.
Since the dawn of civilization, people have always put their efforts so as to find a decent and well-paid job in order to guarantee their future lives. Generally phrased, human beings always make the plan for their careers and they want to make sure whether they can be successful or not. But in today's hectic city of life, hardly can people achieve success in their careers even with an impeccable decision. As a palpable example, owing to the inflation, economic recession and so forth, people have difficulty predict everything about the future. In fact, these factors largely determine the success of a career and in the past years, people did not have any problem regarding inflation. To elucidate more on this issue, nowadays, make the plan for a job and do different activities need a prosperous economy in order to guarantee people's lives in the long run.
Another equally salient point in corroborating my stance in this subject is that individuals were courage people in the past and they do all of their activities with a sense of assurance. If we take a minute to ponder over it, people in the past always took risks and tried some new methods in order to evaluate every single condition. Arguably, not only bravery can provide an opportunity for people to become successful but also it allows human beings to do their tasks without reservations and stress. It can be deduced from a combination of breadth of coverage and depth of detail that in today's hectic city of the world, people do not have a motivation and incentive to keep on their jobs. Indeed, become successful in any careers need a hard-working attitude and people should bend over backward to reach their goals.
However, every coin has two sides. People in these years easily and quickly run their own businesses without any problem and by their businesses not only can they accumulate a hoard of money but also can become substantially independent and pay their ways. That being so, make any decision for careers in these years will lead to a conspicuous success. However, it was a story in a nutshell; actually, there are more reasonable grounds that can lend weight to my viewpoint.
In light of reasons elaborated, I reiterate that
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, however, if, regarding, so, well, as to, in fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 13.8261648746 152% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 42.0 43.0788530466 97% => OK
Preposition: 83.0 52.1666666667 159% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2484.0 1977.66487455 126% => OK
No of words: 515.0 407.700716846 126% => OK
Chars per words: 4.82330097087 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.763781212 4.48103885553 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6121189171 2.67179642975 98% => OK
Unique words: 260.0 212.727598566 122% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.504854368932 0.524837075471 96% => OK
syllable_count: 787.5 618.680645161 127% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.1344086022 119% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.9140859997 48.9658058833 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.285714286 100.406767564 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.5238095238 20.6045352989 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.28571428571 5.45110844103 60% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 11.8709677419 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.136221625887 0.236089414692 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0450256044437 0.076458572812 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0383078835318 0.0737576698707 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0728057460692 0.150856017488 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0417981020961 0.0645574589148 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 11.7677419355 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 58.1214874552 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.1575268817 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.97 10.9000537634 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.2 8.01818996416 102% => OK
difficult_words: 110.0 86.8835125448 127% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 10.002688172 135% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.0537634409 115% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.247311828 137% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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