Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? In the past, young people depended too much on their parents to make decisions for them; today young people are better able to make decisions about their own lives. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
With the development of modern society, people's minds are changing with time. I agree with the claim that young people are more independent in making decisions today. There are several reasons support this idea.
First of all. Financial condition of families is essential to this change. People's financial conditions are more better these days than in the past. The more favorable salary and income of today's family help parents educating their children more easily. Parents can buy more edifying books and send their children to high quality schools. These change facilitate children becoming more informative and educated. For example, in the past, my family could not even afford a book for me to get informations about the world outside. All the knowledge of my family was coming from watching television and listening to the radio program. So short sighted was me then that I must depend on my parents former experience to make decision such as which university should I attend.
Furthermore, high technologies such as highways and internet are invented. It becomes more convenient for youngsters to get whatever they want. Young people can travel to more places than before. Take one of my friends Lin for instance. She had gone to most of Chinese major places such as Chengdu, Guangzhou, and Xi'an in her first year of college. These precious memories made her very intelligent in making individual decisions. She knew what was her real demand. Finally, she chose to study abroad alone. Much of her decision were made by herself instead of her parents, meanwhile her parents were glad to see their daughter's ability to live on her own.
Moreover, more informations are available via browsing various kinds of websites. The more knowledgable youngsters are, the more independent they will become.
In conclusion, better economic conditions together with high developments of high technologies enable today's youth becoming more independent than ever before.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 109, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE
Message: Use only 'better' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
...hange. Peoples financial conditions are more better these days than in the past. The more f...
Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, furthermore, if, moreover, so, then, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 13.8261648746 43% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 11.0286738351 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 33.0 43.0788530466 77% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 52.1666666667 84% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1664.0 1977.66487455 84% => OK
No of words: 315.0 407.700716846 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.28253968254 4.8611393121 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21286593061 4.48103885553 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67695671495 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 212.727598566 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.606349206349 0.524837075471 116% => OK
syllable_count: 517.5 618.680645161 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.6003584229 117% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.1344086022 65% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.3811586708 48.9658058833 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 69.3333333333 100.406767564 69% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.125 20.6045352989 64% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.125 5.45110844103 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 13.0 4.88709677419 266% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.218898676341 0.236089414692 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.056854753263 0.076458572812 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.078992171359 0.0737576698707 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.121042929522 0.150856017488 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0992813928087 0.0645574589148 154% => OK
automated_readability_index: 10.0 11.7677419355 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.28 58.1214874552 100% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.1575268817 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.46 10.9000537634 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.59 8.01818996416 107% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 86.8835125448 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 4.5 10.002688172 45% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.0537634409 72% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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