Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? In the past, young people depended too much on their parents to make decisions for them; today young people are better able to make decisions about their own lives. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Decision making in the past is used to made by parents. In modern era, however, as the ideology of self-independence is spreading among young people, a lot of people believe that young folks can make decisions by themselves. While I do agree with the statement that young people are now less dependent on their parents to an extent, I do think that the answer depends on different scenarios which will be illustrated in the following paragraphs.
First, when it comes to the enrollment to schools, I think that the decision of choosing which school to study is still rarely made by students regardless the change if times. The reason is that students are mostly young, causing parents to regard their children as immature. Therefore, it’s unlikely that students get a chance to choose their school. Another reason which I believe is more practical is that most students are not financially independent, which means that their parents still have absolute dominance when it comes to choosing a school. After all, it is them who pay the tuition.
In contrast to choosing school, there’s still positive progress having been made. Take marriage for example. In earlier times, where the interest of a family was on top of that of a person, it’s normal that a marriage is decided even before a child is born. As for now, the inheritance isn’t the mainstream anymore. Young people such as princess Harry, who quit the royal membership in order to marry Megan, are taking back the right to decide their own marriage.
Lastly, there’s also something that has always been decided by young people, that is, making friends. Parents may control the friends their kids make, but all they can do is to an extent because it’s not possible for parents to follow their kids all day in school just for this reason.
To wrap it up, I think the trend of the society is shifting towards the younger generation in terms of the right of making decisions. Nevertheless, in the current state, I do believe that young people is still very dependent on their parents in some circumstances.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, lastly, may, nevertheless, so, still, therefore, while, after all, as for, for example, i think, in contrast, such as, in contrast to, on top of that
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 15.1003584229 139% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 13.8261648746 7% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 22.0 11.0286738351 199% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 43.0788530466 88% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 52.1666666667 88% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1723.0 1977.66487455 87% => OK
No of words: 354.0 407.700716846 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.86723163842 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33761313653 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61808939816 2.67179642975 98% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 212.727598566 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.536723163842 0.524837075471 102% => OK
syllable_count: 512.1 618.680645161 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.7022820434 48.9658058833 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.352941176 100.406767564 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8235294118 20.6045352989 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.5882352941 5.45110844103 194% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.88709677419 184% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.374459898372 0.236089414692 159% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.108460399348 0.076458572812 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0877059523152 0.0737576698707 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.208603684348 0.150856017488 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.108745344889 0.0645574589148 168% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 11.7677419355 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 58.1214874552 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.97 10.9000537634 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.84 8.01818996416 98% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 86.8835125448 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 10.002688172 135% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.0 Out of 30
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