Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
In the past, young people depended too much on their parents to make decisions for them; today young people are better able to make decisions about their own lives.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Some people say that in the past the young generations were too much dependent on their parents as parents were in charge of their life, but in the present time, the young people are more independent and make their decision of their own. I am agreeing with this stance and believe that young people are now more independent for three reasons.
First of all, young people now make their own decision as they earn their own money. For example, young people are now allowed to do jobs like a grown person and by this process, they have become economically stable and can make their decision of their own. In the past, our grandparents were not allowed to do any jobs when they were young and due to this their decision-making capabilities were restricted. As the children are now earning money, they can use this money of their own and can make their own decisions.
Second of all, young people are now more mentally developed than their parents. For instance, scientists have now found that the brain developments of young people are more rapid than the past generations. As the brain is developing faster, they are now maturing faster and making their decision of their own. In the past, young people were not maturing faster and due to this their decision-making capabilities were hindered. As mature people like to make their own planning, these younger people like to make their own decision in life
Finally, young people are now more educated, as a result, they like to take their decision of their own. For example, younger people are now learning more easily as it is easy to get educated. As we know, an educated person likes to take their own decision, similarly, the young people like to take their decision of their own. In the past, education was limited to only the rich people and due to this, the older generation was dependent on their parents for any decision.
For those above three reasons, I believe that young people make the decision about their life by themselves as they have money, more education, and further mental development.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 241, Rule ID: PROGRESSIVE_VERBS[1]
Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
...and make their decision of their own. I am agreeing with this stance and believe that young...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, if, second, similarly, so, for example, for instance, as a result, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 15.1003584229 132% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 49.0 43.0788530466 114% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 52.1666666667 88% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1712.0 1977.66487455 87% => OK
No of words: 356.0 407.700716846 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.80898876404 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34372677135 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.478687084 2.67179642975 93% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 212.727598566 65% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.387640449438 0.524837075471 74% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 533.7 618.680645161 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.9998067629 48.9658058833 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.133333333 100.406767564 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.7333333333 20.6045352989 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.66666666667 5.45110844103 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 11.8709677419 51% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.88709677419 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.478200534265 0.236089414692 203% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.227130107891 0.076458572812 297% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0938806875618 0.0737576698707 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.339241405554 0.150856017488 225% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0651979907293 0.0645574589148 101% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 11.7677419355 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 58.1214874552 97% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.91 10.9000537634 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.26 8.01818996416 91% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 86.8835125448 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 10.002688172 135% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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