Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? People are happier when they give away extra money to charity or a good cause rather than when they spend it on themselves.
In today's fast-paced world, many people are just concerned with their own enterprises, with little regard for the welfare of others or society as a whole. However, many people are eager to devote their money to charity in order to improve the world. What drives their behavior? They are more likely to be content than individuals who spend their entire income on themselves.
Initially, helping others makes us feel better about ourselves. We think we can affect positive change in the world and that our actions have a positive impact. Consequently, we may acquire a sense of self-satisfaction and pride, which is needed for enjoyment. Those who are just preoccupied with themselves are unlikely to experience this sense of fulfillment, though. They may experience temporary happiness while accumulating wealth, but money cannot bring a lasting sense of fulfillment. Ebenezer Scrooge, the miserly protagonist of Charles Dickens' "A Christmas Carol," is dissatisfied despite his vast wealth. Only after seeing his folly and becoming generous was he ultimately able to experience happiness.
Moreover, when we contribute to others, we create relationships and social ties, which enhances our sense of connection with the world and other people. Humans, as we all know, are social animals; thus, when we feel connected to one another, we feel secure and content. In addition, serving a worthy cause reminds us that we may support causes that are more important than ourselves. Even though we do not know the people we assist, we may be able to connect with them due to our contribution to mankind. According to a study conducted by Fudan University in 2021, those who prefer giving to others have around 69% higher levels of social connectedness than those who do not. Only by acting gently toward others may we experience the bond that links us all and keep our pleasure throughout our entire lives.
If we continue to contribute to charity, we may develop a reputation for generosity, which will gain us more accolades and friends. Everyone desires to have generous friends. Life may be more enjoyable if we have more friends that support and advocate for us. Consider my brother; he wants to donate his clothing, books, and money to charity. He not only continues to demonstrate charity on his own, but also encourages others to do likewise. Having founded a charity organization in his college, he and his classmates yearly organize a variety of charitable activities to benefit the disadvantaged. As a result, he becomes the university's most popular student. When asked if he is content with his life, he always replies, "Absolutely!" It is his philanthropic drive that ties him to his peers and enables him to completely appreciate life.
I concur that persons who are willing to donate money to charity or contribute to a great cause are happier than those who never give anything.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, however, if, likewise, may, moreover, so, thus, while, in addition, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 19.0 11.0286738351 172% => OK
Pronoun: 70.0 43.0788530466 162% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 56.0 52.1666666667 107% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.0752688172 161% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2443.0 1977.66487455 124% => OK
No of words: 475.0 407.700716846 117% => OK
Chars per words: 5.14315789474 4.8611393121 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.66845742379 4.48103885553 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97155191367 2.67179642975 111% => OK
Unique words: 262.0 212.727598566 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.551578947368 0.524837075471 105% => OK
syllable_count: 783.9 618.680645161 127% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 17.0 9.59856630824 177% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 3.51792114695 199% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 20.6003584229 126% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.7309064531 48.9658058833 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.9615384615 100.406767564 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2692307692 20.6045352989 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 5.45110844103 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 20.0 11.8709677419 168% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.146761457658 0.236089414692 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0399831786517 0.076458572812 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0421784756504 0.0737576698707 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0951195792291 0.150856017488 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0427456333592 0.0645574589148 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 11.7677419355 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 58.1214874552 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.1575268817 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.53 10.9000537634 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.08 8.01818996416 113% => OK
difficult_words: 137.0 86.8835125448 158% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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