Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? People are happier when they give away extra money to charity or a good cause rather than when they spend it on themselves.
In today's fast-paced world, many individuals are just concerned with their businesses, with little consideration for the well-being of others or the entire society. However, many individuals are willing to donate their money to charity to make the world a better place. What motivates them to do this? They are most likely happy than those who spend all of their money on themselves.
To begin with, helping others encourages us to feel good about ourselves. We believe we can make a difference in the world and that our activities have a good influence. As a result, we might obtain a sense of self-satisfaction and pride, which is essential for pleasure. Those who are simply concerned with themselves, on the other hand, are unlikely to enjoy this sense of fulfillment. They may be happy for a time while they collect money, but money cannot provide them with a feeling of completion in the long run. Though possessing considerable money, Ebenezer Scrooge, the stingy central character in Charles Dickens's 'A Christmas Carol,' is not pleased. Only after he recognized his error and became generous could he be happy in the end.
Furthermore, when we give to others, we form relationships and social links, making us feel more connected to the world and other people. Humans, as we all know, are social animals; thus, when we feel bonded to one another, we obtain a sense of security and feel happy. Furthermore, serving a worthwhile cause reminds us that there are causes more significant than ourselves that we can support. Even if we don't know the individuals we serve, we may connect with them since we contribute to humanity. According to a Fudan University study done in 2021, people who prefer contributing to others have better degrees of social connectivity, around 69% more than those who are not inclined to do so. It is only through acting kindly toward other people that we may experience the connection that unites us all and maintain our happiness throughout our lives.
Another incentive is that if we continue to donate to charities, we may establish a reputation for giving, earning us more praise and friends. Everyone wishes to befriend generous individuals. We may enjoy our life more if we have more friends that support and advocate for us. Consider my brother; he wants to donate to charities by donating his clothing, books, and money. Not only does he continue to perform acts of generosity on his own, but he also encourages others to do so. Having created a charity group in his college, he and his classmates conduct various charity events annually to assist the underprivileged. As a result, he becomes the most well-liked student in the university. When asked if he is satisfied with his life, he consistently responds, "Definitely!" It is his passion for philanthropy that binds him to his peers and allows him to appreciate life fully.
Overall, I agree with the view that individuals who are prepared to offer money to charity or contribute to a worthy cause are happier than those who never donate anything.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, may, so, thus, well, while, as a result, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 15.1003584229 126% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 19.0 11.0286738351 172% => OK
Pronoun: 79.0 43.0788530466 183% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 62.0 52.1666666667 119% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2552.0 1977.66487455 129% => OK
No of words: 513.0 407.700716846 126% => OK
Chars per words: 4.9746588694 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.75914943092 4.48103885553 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9370791553 2.67179642975 110% => OK
Unique words: 264.0 212.727598566 124% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.514619883041 0.524837075471 98% => OK
syllable_count: 816.3 618.680645161 132% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 17.0 9.59856630824 177% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 8.0 3.51792114695 227% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 20.6003584229 126% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.7030122608 48.9658058833 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.1538461538 100.406767564 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7307692308 20.6045352989 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.23076923077 5.45110844103 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 20.0 11.8709677419 168% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.165842788907 0.236089414692 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0476842676692 0.076458572812 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0479766312671 0.0737576698707 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.110744231596 0.150856017488 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0397800790072 0.0645574589148 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 11.7677419355 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 58.1214874552 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.55 10.9000537634 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.73 8.01818996416 109% => OK
difficult_words: 135.0 86.8835125448 155% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.