Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? People are never satisfied with what they have; they always want something more or something different. Use specific reasons to support your answer
There is no doubt that human is a complex creature and his behaviors are unpredictable. In this regard, a controversial question related to one human characteristic is that whether people are never satisfied and want more and more or not. Personally, it is my firm conviction that human is insatiable naturally. Therefore, unfortunately, it is not feasible to see their real fulfillment. To support my idea, I will discuss some considerable factors in the following.
First and foremost, life is unlimited; so, there are myriad things that achieving all of them is impossible. With having basic information in statistic, we can calculate the number of possibilities in the world which is limitless. Indeed, we can not gain all of our dreams because the time and energy are limited. Moreover, this limited ability is not enough for gaining even 1 percent of available things. For instance, if we look at top wealthy individuals in the world, we can see that they also have some deficiencies in their private life. In other words, the available achievements in this sophisticated environment which we live in is more unachievable than anything we could think about it. Briefly, this inevitable feature of the life never let humans fulfill.
Secondly, people in every situation compare themselves with each other, and this harmful habit does not let them please. It is due to the fact that they interested in being superior to others. To this aim, they must compete with the nearly limitless number of people. This never-ending process will not be finished; so, the people will not be satisfied. For example, my aunt who is really perfect in various aspects such as having fancy lifestyle, cute face, healthy body, faithful family and so on; however, she is not as happy as she must be because she believes that her neighbor is more successful. This dangerous tendency, the comparison with others, steals the human's satisfaction and makes it unobtainable for them. Indeed, we can not utterly change this intrinsic tendency in humans; hence, they never fulfill until they are human.
To recapitulate, human beings are complex and strange. As one example, they are never satisfied and this is not correlated with their possessions because all the times they want more or different things. In my view, not only is it due to the unlimited possibility in the life, but also the psychological feature in human, which is about tendency for comparison, is responsible.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 667, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'humans'' or 'human's'?
Suggestion: humans'; human's
... the comparison with others, steals the humans satisfaction and makes it unobtainable ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, briefly, but, first, hence, however, if, look, moreover, really, second, secondly, so, therefore, for example, for instance, no doubt, such as, in my view, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 30.0 15.1003584229 199% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 55.0 43.0788530466 128% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 52.1666666667 77% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2055.0 1977.66487455 104% => OK
No of words: 406.0 407.700716846 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.06157635468 4.8611393121 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.48881294772 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92522191379 2.67179642975 109% => OK
Unique words: 222.0 212.727598566 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.546798029557 0.524837075471 104% => OK
syllable_count: 654.3 618.680645161 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 17.0 9.59856630824 177% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.9407235953 48.9658058833 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.4090909091 100.406767564 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4545454545 20.6045352989 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 5.45110844103 147% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 3.85842293907 285% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.176448457314 0.236089414692 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0524794578883 0.076458572812 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0658420312337 0.0737576698707 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.118941134845 0.150856017488 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0449468365734 0.0645574589148 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 11.7677419355 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 58.1214874552 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 10.9000537634 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.61 8.01818996416 107% => OK
difficult_words: 105.0 86.8835125448 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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