Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? People behave differently when they wear different clothes. Do you agree that different clothes influence the way people behave? Use specific examples to support your answer.
Human behavior, being one of the most complex things in this world, has been always studied by experts. Many studies were done to determine the items that influence our behavior. Many people think that different clothes influence the way people behave. In my view, this is totally true. I will try to expound the reasons behind this notion in the next few words.
Our appearance is an important part of our lives. Although it may not be ideal, our appearance often determines what people think about us, and how they treat us. Some people also believe that the clothes we wear influence our behavior. Others disagree. In my view, they do influence our behavior for two important reasons.
First, different clothes affect humans psychologically. In other words, the way we look or wear affects our minds indirectly. Wearing high-quality cloths may increase personal confidence and energy. Take myself as an example, one day during my work as a doctor, I have discovered that I didn’t wash my white coat. So, I spent the whole day upset and stressful. Moreover, I have made a silly mistake in front of my professor, that I never do. This illustrates that confidence may decrease with bad clothing.
Second, different clothes have different impressions of the surrounding people. In other words, getting different reactions from the surrounding people may influence the way we behave. As human behavior changes depending on the environment around. For example, let’s consider a normal guy wearing a black suit with a black tie. The people around him will start to show more respect, and eventually, this will make him behave more different, maybe more formal. Having good clean clothes is one of the most motivating things in young lives.
As a conclusion, Having different cloths have many influences on human behavior. Either through confidence, the difference in environment reactions or even motivation.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: has always been
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...people may influence the way we behave. As human behavior changes depending on the...
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Message: Consider using 'the surrounding people'?
Suggestion: The surrounding people
... wearing a black suit with a black tie. The people around him will start to show more respect, and ev...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, look, may, moreover, second, so, for example, in my view, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 15.1003584229 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 13.8261648746 43% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 40.0 43.0788530466 93% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 52.1666666667 54% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 14.0 8.0752688172 173% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1609.0 1977.66487455 81% => OK
No of words: 312.0 407.700716846 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.15705128205 4.8611393121 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20279927342 4.48103885553 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7689469673 2.67179642975 104% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 212.727598566 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.570512820513 0.524837075471 109% => OK
syllable_count: 486.9 618.680645161 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.6003584229 117% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.1344086022 65% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 25.2033013711 48.9658058833 51% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 67.0416666667 100.406767564 67% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.0 20.6045352989 63% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.70833333333 5.45110844103 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 12.0 4.88709677419 246% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.233864941911 0.236089414692 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0663709290435 0.076458572812 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0764102316657 0.0737576698707 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.13512405771 0.150856017488 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.033275942428 0.0645574589148 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.4 11.7677419355 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.28 58.1214874552 100% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.1575268817 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.76 10.9000537634 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.87 8.01818996416 98% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 86.8835125448 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 10.002688172 55% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.0537634409 72% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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