Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Boys and girls should attend separate schools. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Schools are an important part of our lives. They are essential to building a healthy community through teaching and developing our youth. We always try to find the best ways of having excellent schools. One of the heated debates recently in this realm is whether boys and girls should attend separate schools or not. Personally, I think it is better if we have the same schools for both boys and girls for the following reasons.
First, it would be less expensive. If we want to have a good education, we need to build big schools with a lot of libraries, laboratories, and sports fields. So, Building schools needs a lot of money. Building separate schools will cause unnecessary waste of money. Moreover, families would need to pay more for transportation to far areas where separate schools would be located. For example, in my country, we had separate schools. when I was at the age of the school, I was attending a different school from my sister. My family was obliged to pay for transportation for both of us separately which is more expensive. Moreover. Each school has different requirements for books and a different time of lessons. Many extra fees could be avoided if we had the same schools for both of us. Eventually, separate schools would be better.
Second, separate schools can help to build normal and healthy personalities. There is nothing justifies the separation between boys and girls at schools as they both will be together at universities. It is really important for our kids to be in touch with the opposite sex at schools. This can help them understanding the differences and building an open personality. For instance, I have a friend at the university who is very shy and incapable to talk with girls till now. This is because he attended separate schools in his home country until entering university. Also, he doesn’t have any sisters so he doesn’t know how to deal with girls correctly. If he attended a separate school, he would be able to be more confident and successful. So, separate schools are better for students.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: When
...in my country, we had separate schools. when I was at the age of the school, I was a...
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Line 2, column 622, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Moreover,
... us separately which is more expensive. Moreover. Each school has different requirements...
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Line 3, column 304, Rule ID: ADVISE_VBG[9]
Message: The verb 'help' is used with infinitive: 'to understand' or 'understand'.
Suggestion: to understand; understand
...site sex at schools. This can help them understanding the differences and building an open pe...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, moreover, really, second, so, for example, for instance, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 15.1003584229 139% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 9.8082437276 133% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.0286738351 36% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 33.0 43.0788530466 77% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 52.1666666667 81% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1714.0 1977.66487455 87% => OK
No of words: 353.0 407.700716846 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.85552407932 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33454660006 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86644680153 2.67179642975 107% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 212.727598566 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.509915014164 0.524837075471 97% => OK
syllable_count: 522.0 618.680645161 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.59856630824 146% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.94265232975 20% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 20.6003584229 121% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.1344086022 70% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 26.2058314121 48.9658058833 54% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 68.56 100.406767564 68% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.12 20.6045352989 69% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.24 5.45110844103 59% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.53405017921 66% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.88709677419 184% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.125797829199 0.236089414692 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0436185613489 0.076458572812 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0404531444748 0.0737576698707 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.10747360202 0.150856017488 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0379397617055 0.0645574589148 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.5 11.7677419355 72% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 58.1214874552 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.1575268817 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.32 10.9000537634 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.01 8.01818996416 87% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 86.8835125448 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.0537634409 76% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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