Some students prefer classes with open discussions between the professor and students and almost no lectures. Other students prefer classes with lectures and almost no discussions. Which do you prefer? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Education is an important part of our lives. A successful education system can be the main role of developing countries. Some students prefer classes with open discussions between the professor and students and almost no lectures, while others disagree. In my view, it is much better to have open discussions for the following reasons.
First, this kind of education is definitely more effective. While students can read any lecture by themselves at home, these discussions will enhance their understanding. The students will have an active learning tool and will be able to benefit from the personal experience of the professor. This is not possible with traditional education. For example, last year I was in the fifth grade of med school. We had a professor that was asking us to read about specific topics at home in order to discuss them in class. The next day we would have a discussion while examining a patient with the same disease we read about. Unlike other classes, which were so boring, all the students were participating in the discussion. It was like completing the missing parts that we were not able to get without the discussion. We couldn’t forget what he taught us even after months. Consequently, open discussions are much better.
Second, having open discussions is more fun and motivating for students. In addition to effective learning, students have the opportunity to express themselves. This helps them to improve their social skills and build a healthy and strong personality. Although some students might be more dominant in the discussions, a successful professor can make all of the students active. Take my friend as an example. He was a very lazy student who used to sleep during lessons. As participating in classes is mandatory in our university, he was coming to classes to sleeping only. When we had that professor with the active discussions, my friend has become another person. Although he is a very shy person, he started to participate and to be more confident. These discussions have influenced the way he feels about himself. That’s why I feel open discussions are much better.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, first, if, second, so, while, for example, i feel, in addition, kind of, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 15.1003584229 139% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 13.8261648746 51% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 38.0 43.0788530466 88% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 52.1666666667 82% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1785.0 1977.66487455 90% => OK
No of words: 352.0 407.700716846 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.07102272727 4.8611393121 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33147354134 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94551586768 2.67179642975 110% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 212.727598566 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.548295454545 0.524837075471 104% => OK
syllable_count: 555.3 618.680645161 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.59856630824 135% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 20.6003584229 126% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.1344086022 65% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 26.5764499568 48.9658058833 54% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 68.6538461538 100.406767564 68% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.5384615385 20.6045352989 66% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.73076923077 5.45110844103 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.53405017921 66% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 11.8709677419 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.314226777594 0.236089414692 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.077775023359 0.076458572812 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.126137592693 0.0737576698707 171% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.244906197396 0.150856017488 162% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.104770301049 0.0645574589148 162% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.2 11.7677419355 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.28 58.1214874552 100% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.1575268817 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.53 10.9000537634 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.96 8.01818996416 99% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 86.8835125448 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.0537634409 72% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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