Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? People behave differently when they wear different clothes. Do you agree that different clothes influence the way people behave? Use specific examples to support your answer.
Our world is made up of different colours. White, yellow, blue, red, black, orange and a million of other colours have made up our universe so wonderful. Every colour has its own characteristics which makes it unique from others. I both agree and disagree with the author’s statement that the different colours of clothes make people behave differently.
Firstly, we can categorise colours into two groups, mainly, light / bright colours and dark colours. You might have heard of the famous phenomena of black body absorption, it states that a black box or a black colour or any dark colours are a great absorbent of energy or light or heat. For example, if a person is wearing a black cloth on a sunny day then he is most likely to absorb a great amount of the sun light or the energy produced by the sun. It will increase his/her body temperature which will eventually make an impact on his/her mental thoughts and behaviour as well. He will respond to the different conditions in his vicinity with an intense thoughts.
On the other hand, white colour is not an absorbent but a repellent of energy. A person wearing white shirt or a white colour cloth on a shine sunny day will be more calm and composed in comparison to the person wearing dark colour clothes. Thus, he will respond to the same situations with a calm and chill thoughts. So, colours can effect the way a person behaves because the colours play an important role in accepting the type of energy towards an individual.
Secondly, in contrast to the above statement, we all known India is a country of diverse religions. We have people leaving in our society who belongs to both Christians and Hinduism. For example, when a person dies in a Christian family to perform his last offering all the relatives or people present in the ceremony wears a black colour dress to show sincere grief on the loss of life. Here, the colour of cloth doesn’t determine the actions or the mental and the emotional level of the person in this situation, they all are filled with sad emotions.
Hindus, on the other hand follow a totally different tradition. They wear white clothes to perform the last rituals of the dead person. The contrast in this situation is that the colour of the cloth might be different in both the situations but the feeling of sorrow, of loss is same for every person present in the situation. Thus, the behaviour of a person can not only be determined by the colour of clothes wared by him or her.
Hence, in the end to sum up I would not totally agree or disagree with the point made by the author that the colour of our clothes determine the behaviour of a person. Colours may made a small influence on the behaviour but they are not the only reason for the actions performed by an individual.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, hence, if, may, second, secondly, so, then, thus, well, for example, in contrast, in contrast to, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 13.8261648746 152% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 34.0 43.0788530466 79% => OK
Preposition: 66.0 52.1666666667 127% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2302.0 1977.66487455 116% => OK
No of words: 495.0 407.700716846 121% => OK
Chars per words: 4.65050505051 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.71684168287 4.48103885553 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55699533752 2.67179642975 96% => OK
Unique words: 221.0 212.727598566 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.446464646465 0.524837075471 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 714.6 618.680645161 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.0165690983 48.9658058833 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.086956522 100.406767564 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5217391304 20.6045352989 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.39130434783 5.45110844103 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.53405017921 132% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.85842293907 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.174654369482 0.236089414692 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0601604781118 0.076458572812 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0731758691913 0.0737576698707 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.102111392118 0.150856017488 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0437156315375 0.0645574589148 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 11.7677419355 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 58.1214874552 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.69 10.9000537634 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.45 8.01818996416 93% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 86.8835125448 100% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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