Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? People benefit more from traveling in their own country than from traveling to foreign countries.
No one can deny that there are different perspectives about choosing destination on the trip. To me, I enjoy traveling, no matter where I go but if I were forced to choose, I definitely prefer traveling to foreign countries. It is my firm belief that experience of traveling abroad not only learn us about various culture and traditions in other countries but also improve our personality by taking us away from our comfort zone.
My primary reason is that there is more advantage from traveling abroad because we can learn about various cultures and traditions all around the world. This kind of experience is so precious. I have to admit that my opinion on this matter has been profoundly influenced by my own experience. Last year I had a journey to India and it was so exciting. I learned that people can live together easily and without any problem, even with have different religions. I also tried especial spicy food dishes and learn new recipes for my food habits. As a result, that trip was so useful for me and give me a wide insight about people and their culture.
Secondly, traveling to other countries help us to improve our personality. I mean with travel to other cities far far away from our hometown we are taking away from the comfort zone. An experience like this gives us more confidence to pursue our goals without fears. When you take away from your comfort zone and try new things, you believe yourself more than before and your personality improves in the best way.
In light of the above mentioned reasons, I strongly believe that there are more benefits in traveling to foreign countries.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: far
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, second, secondly, so, i mean, kind of, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 47.0 43.0788530466 109% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 52.1666666667 75% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1343.0 1977.66487455 68% => OK
No of words: 282.0 407.700716846 69% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.76241134752 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09790868904 4.48103885553 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58670139238 2.67179642975 97% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 212.727598566 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.560283687943 0.524837075471 107% => OK
syllable_count: 432.9 618.680645161 70% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.4864815123 48.9658058833 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.5333333333 100.406767564 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8 20.6045352989 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.33333333333 5.45110844103 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.26082718517 0.236089414692 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0758815051928 0.076458572812 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0647516051109 0.0737576698707 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.16079143551 0.150856017488 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0463522897155 0.0645574589148 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 11.7677419355 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 58.1214874552 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.33 10.9000537634 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.5 8.01818996416 94% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 86.8835125448 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 10.002688172 135% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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