Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? People benefit more from traveling in their own country than from traveling to foreign countries. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer
Traveling is such a good experience that a person may face for his life. It does not matter the destiny but what really matters it is only what we are going to find there. What sort of information we will find there. As a matter of fact, somehow, it is going to depend on the purpose of the trip, but it is agreeable to say that it is worthy travel around our own country.
Firstly, let's say that we are studying about a specific subject where there is no place elsewhere we can find the same one to study and there are not equipments for doing so. Therefore, there is no another country better than our own to accomplish such task. Besides, even if we can find the same subject in other countries, it will not be worthy to study abroad sometimes because it may be expensive and the information exchanged will be alike.
Secondly, we do not know but we are surrounded by wonderful landscapes in different areas from different states. For example, I used to speak to my mother to travel abroad because going abroad is much more interesting than staying in our own country, she would probably learn much more there than here, untill the moment when I traveled to another state. During the trip I got astonished how amazing my country is. I did not realize that there are bunches of wonders to be discovered that it is much better to stay in my country than travel abroad.
However, when our country is very small and do not offer many facilities, one of the best way to look for our own good is by traveling abroad. It does not matter if it is expensive or not to study or do any other activities having seen that our own country is not going to help we have to do it by our own ways.
Finally, traveling around our own country may make us save money, time and find out many things which have not yet been found so far.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 195, Rule ID: NOW[2]
Message: Did you mean 'now' (=at this moment) instead of 'no' (negation)?
Suggestion: now
...ments for doing so. Therefore, there is no another country better than our own to ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, finally, first, firstly, however, if, look, may, really, second, secondly, so, therefore, for example, sort of, as a matter of fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 15.1003584229 159% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 43.0 43.0788530466 100% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 52.1666666667 67% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1480.0 1977.66487455 75% => OK
No of words: 342.0 407.700716846 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.32748538012 4.8611393121 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30037696126 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.33356782594 2.67179642975 87% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 212.727598566 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.482456140351 0.524837075471 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 475.2 618.680645161 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.94265232975 20% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.6003584229 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.1344086022 119% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.7483436243 48.9658058833 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.714285714 100.406767564 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.4285714286 20.6045352989 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.3571428571 5.45110844103 190% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.186205926888 0.236089414692 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0669735484497 0.076458572812 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0445246643316 0.0737576698707 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.104166274504 0.150856017488 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0489376744942 0.0645574589148 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 11.7677419355 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.04 58.1214874552 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.13 10.9000537634 75% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.0 8.01818996416 87% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 86.8835125448 54% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.002688172 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.0537634409 115% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 63.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 19.0 Out of 30
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