Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
People benefit more from traveling in their own country than from traveling to foreign countries.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Traveling throughout history has been considered one of the best ways to gain invaluable experiences. Although some may believe that foreign travel would cost more, on the other hand, some disagree. Depending on the personality type, personal experiences, and emotional concerns people have various attitudes toward this issue. I am on the opinion that these extra expenses would worth its merits. Foreign travel brings new experiences in terms of new cultural perspectives, new environmental conditions, and new ways of thinking in other religions.
To begin with, one could gain experience from abroad travels that is not achievable in the domestic journies. The experience of meeting new people with new ways of thinking towards life is the gift that we obtain from foreign travel, despite all the financial expenses that we should undertake in such travels. For instance, I remember, last year, I had a travel to Turkey, where I found new people with a rather different lifestyle. Although most people are busy with career maters in my country, I saw that in Turkey, individuals play a premium on fun activities.
Another rationale to endorse my point of view is that abroad travel leads to be familiar with new environments. I live in a country that the weather is cool almost the year and all the activities are held indoors. However, in one of my travel to Mediterranean countries, I realized that people enjoy the sun where they have doing their routine interactions in the community.
If you like to experience new foods and cuisines, you should definitely travel abroad. All of us have tasted the various foods of our country, but new cuisines of distant countries are completely diverse in terms of ingredients and style of cooking. I remember I found delicious seafood in Italy that I have never tasted before in my country, even in restaurants that present foreign foods.
To put it in a nutshell, all the reasons mentioned above lead us to the conclusion that foreign travel has benefits that domestic travel could never provide, despite the extra costs that worth the experience of the journey. I strongly recommend that every one who could afford distant travel, to try it at least once a year, since our time for living is limited.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 355, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[1]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'travel'.
Suggestion: travel
... instance, I remember, last year, I had a travel to Turkey, where I found new people wit...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, may, so, at least, for instance, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 13.8261648746 43% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 18.0 11.0286738351 163% => OK
Pronoun: 45.0 43.0788530466 104% => OK
Preposition: 57.0 52.1666666667 109% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1897.0 1977.66487455 96% => OK
No of words: 375.0 407.700716846 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.05866666667 4.8611393121 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40055868397 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76691565145 2.67179642975 104% => OK
Unique words: 201.0 212.727598566 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.536 0.524837075471 102% => OK
syllable_count: 584.1 618.680645161 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.6727911468 48.9658058833 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.588235294 100.406767564 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0588235294 20.6045352989 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.88235294118 5.45110844103 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.248979058777 0.236089414692 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0781459974887 0.076458572812 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0505615677791 0.0737576698707 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.137788986043 0.150856017488 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0361555950935 0.0645574589148 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 11.7677419355 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 58.1214874552 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.1575268817 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 10.9000537634 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.56 8.01818996416 107% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 86.8835125448 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.002688172 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.