Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? People should sometimes do things that they do not enjoy doing. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
There are many controversies about somethings taking some actions that people do not like. Some people might not agree with the idea because they believe that this is violation on their freedom. However, I believe there are some cases that we have to do something we do not enjoy for great causes.
To begin with, no one could easily deny that people should restrict their rights themselves in emergency situations even though this restriction is not pleasure for all people. For example, in COVID-19 pandemic situation, people are forced to wear facial masks to protect themselves and other people from spreading virus. Also, in some areas which shows high number of infected people, people are not allowed to come out from their houses. Many people argue that taking all these actions for preventing further spread of virus are not enjoyable, but this is necessary to keep all people safe. Therefore, to overcome emergency situation, people should admit that they have to cooperate with their neighbors and governments by taking actions requested to overcome the situation although these actions make some inconveniences.
Moreover, as people usually said, there is no gain if there is no pain. If people want to acquire more knowledge or skills, they should suffer from doing excessive study or practice even though studying and practicing more is not usually considered joyful. According to research conducted by Seoul National University, people who devote more than two thousand hours on one field are more likely to be successful in the field. Also, Jisung Park, who once considered one of the successful professional soccer players, mentioned that tremendous amounts of painful practice times made him as a more skillful player. As these examples shows, it is manifest that people should endure some unpleasant times to be more successful.
In sum, as discussed above, to overcome emergency situations and become more successful, people should agree that they need to do something less joyful because it will help them eventually. Therefore, avoiding unpleasant actions might not be the best idea in all cases.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, moreover, so, therefore, for example, in all cases, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 13.8261648746 51% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 43.0788530466 74% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 52.1666666667 75% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1784.0 1977.66487455 90% => OK
No of words: 341.0 407.700716846 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.23167155425 4.8611393121 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29722995808 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6047725758 2.67179642975 97% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 212.727598566 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.545454545455 0.524837075471 104% => OK
syllable_count: 555.3 618.680645161 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.59856630824 31% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.2651296575 48.9658058833 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.933333333 100.406767564 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.7333333333 20.6045352989 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.93333333333 5.45110844103 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 11.8709677419 42% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.85842293907 259% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.209362102912 0.236089414692 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.076925121661 0.076458572812 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0674323195529 0.0737576698707 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.14766399658 0.150856017488 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0708807011479 0.0645574589148 110% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 11.7677419355 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 58.1214874552 85% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.1575268817 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.35 10.9000537634 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.43 8.01818996416 105% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 86.8835125448 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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