Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? A person's childhood years( the time from birth to twelve years of age) are the most important years of person's life. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Yes, I agree with the statement a person’s childhood year plays very important role. I think, the person learns a lot in those years. I would like to explain furthermore by providing additional information.
Firstly, we will be talked about the initial years for example 0-6, in this span of life every person builds the health and immune power and also the development of the brain. For example, eating habits also, we introduce with new things every day. This time span is totally dependent upon the parents, we follow their instruction, we do as they said. So, we can say that, this time of period is also important for parents. Because, it depends on them, how they make the foundation for their child…
Secondly, the age between, 6-12 years, we start to learn about the moral values, structure of society and also the educational interest, we start involving in culture of society. This age gives a little understanding about good and bad. This year is very important for building good habits which impact on whole life. Also, at this age we start realizing the value of relation’s, and it helps to the bonding with particular person in our family. This time span is very important for our education. For example, we start to going in school, and it builds the foundation of future education.
Finally, all these years are totally impacting on how we are going to get good life and also what kind of personality we are going to have. In all these years parents plays very important role in their child’s upbringing process. Sometimes they are responsible for what their learn and what he is getting from the things he is learning.
Therefore, the persons childhood years specifically the time from birth to twelve years of the age is most important time of person’s life. Because we learn from the different phase and we build our own life, from learning this.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 11.0286738351 18% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 44.0 43.0788530466 102% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 52.1666666667 81% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1559.0 1977.66487455 79% => OK
No of words: 323.0 407.700716846 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.826625387 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23936324884 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5766959499 2.67179642975 96% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 212.727598566 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.50773993808 0.524837075471 97% => OK
syllable_count: 470.7 618.680645161 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 17.0 9.59856630824 177% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 49.5204472047 48.9658058833 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.6111111111 100.406767564 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.9444444444 20.6045352989 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.11111111111 5.45110844103 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.287993317954 0.236089414692 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.111245676955 0.076458572812 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.148429244631 0.0737576698707 201% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.208939116634 0.150856017488 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.122987845859 0.0645574589148 191% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 11.7677419355 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 58.1214874552 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.44 10.9000537634 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.61 8.01818996416 95% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 86.8835125448 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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