Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? A person should never make an important decision alone. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
“using other’s opinion is the best method for education” Tara Westover, Educated, 2018. Although some people believe that a person can make a decision alone, others think that he or she should not do that. As far as I am concerned, making a decision is a convoluted, critical decision, hence people must use others’ opinions because it reduces the possible drawbacks, mitigates the public contentions, as well as analyzes the opinion deeply. In the following, I am inclined to put forth some arguments to support the position.
First and foremost, utilizing others’ opinions and experiences reduces the possible drawbacks and makes the choice accurately. Because everyone has a different attitude toward a subject, it helps people to identify the possible drawbacks, foible points, or obscure angels to solve them effectively. Indeed, it helps people to make a genuine decision and reduce the negative consequences. Thus, using others’ experiences broadens people’s horizons toward a better selection.
Another thing coming to the mind is that making important decisions alone will put the people on the brink of jeopardy, especially public contentions. For instance, many dictators make an important decision alone which influences on millions of people’s lives. As an illustrated case, in ancient Egypt, pharaohs, who were making critical decisions, caused public rebellions which ruined the empire. Thus, in some cases leaders should pay attention to others’ opinions.
Last but not least, paying attention to other’s opinion and then making a decision can increase people’s self-confidence. In other words, the people sense that they considered the subject thoroughly and their decision is an appropriate one. From sociologists points of view, this decision will determine the people’s strategy to do their work. For instance, in Master’s thesis defendant course, many students give their opinions about the thesis, it will help the research team to apply the research effectively. Hence, using others’ opinions is beneficiary.
In the nutshell, making a decision alone is problematic and increase the future failures. If people had used others’ opinions, societies would have not encountered various problems.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, hence, if, so, then, thus, well, another thing, for instance, as well as, in other words, in some cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 15.1003584229 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 43.0788530466 44% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 52.1666666667 48% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1958.0 1977.66487455 99% => OK
No of words: 338.0 407.700716846 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.79289940828 4.8611393121 119% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28774723029 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.17677643951 2.67179642975 119% => OK
Unique words: 195.0 212.727598566 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.576923076923 0.524837075471 110% => OK
syllable_count: 609.3 618.680645161 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.51630824373 119% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.8469047231 48.9658058833 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.052631579 100.406767564 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7894736842 20.6045352989 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.05263157895 5.45110844103 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.85842293907 207% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.140367275565 0.236089414692 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0567654587829 0.076458572812 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0447870880919 0.0737576698707 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0926903031718 0.150856017488 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0319635333322 0.0645574589148 50% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 11.7677419355 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.3 58.1214874552 64% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.1575268817 121% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.01 10.9000537634 147% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.15 8.01818996416 114% => OK
difficult_words: 100.0 86.8835125448 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 10.002688172 120% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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