Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? A person should never make an important decision alone. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer
It goes without saying that the decision-making process has become an inseparable part of our daily life. Its significance ranges from trivial issues as the choice of daily dress to life-altering decisions including marriage. One of the heated debates in this realm is whether it is an intellectual thought to make critical decisions alone. Although there might be some different perspectives, it is my conviction that seeking an opinion of people having rich experiences is the best way. I will support this view with arguments in the following paragraphs.
First and foremost, taking a decision can directly or indirectly affect our family members or people beyond our family. Hence, it is advisable for us to consult experts about the deciding issue especially when it comes to business, political or environmental issues. This example makes clear my view is that in the seventies and eighties of the last century, some local governments in east China constructed many chemical plants to ease the development of economy without hearing the advice of environmental experts. Consequently, the wastes and gases discharged from these plants have resulted in serious pollution to the local environment. Therefore, these such decisions have adverse impacts on all aspects of people’s lives and people suffer the consequences of the unwise decisions made by the governments.
Moreover, humanity has not infinite insight and knowledge. In other words, it takes a lot of time to gather all the necessary information one needs to take an informed decision. Thus, the decision-making process is slowed down. But if a person asks experts for their advice in the matter of deciding issue, taking advantage of using other people knowledge and experiences allow them to save a lot of time. In this way, they can be some steps ahead of others. For instance, when I was a university student, I worked on my thesis which was in the last steps. Unfortunately, I faced a problem in my numerical simulation at that time. There was not enough time to resolve this problem since I needed to defend my master thesis before spring. So I talked to my friends to help me with my situation I countered, and their suggestions were very helpful. Had I not talk about the issue I would not have ended my thesis on time.
In conclusion, we face certain situations or dilemmas which demand decision-making. It might put at stake all aspects of people’s lives directly or indirectly. Based on the ideas that were presented above, it is always better to follow the advice of our experienced people to make sure that our decision lies in the best interests of ourselves and people around us. Besides this benefit, it also leads to saving a lot of time on information searching.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, consequently, first, hence, if, moreover, so, therefore, thus, for instance, in conclusion, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 55.0 43.0788530466 128% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 69.0 52.1666666667 132% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2303.0 1977.66487455 116% => OK
No of words: 457.0 407.700716846 112% => OK
Chars per words: 5.03938730853 4.8611393121 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.62358717085 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97832475404 2.67179642975 111% => OK
Unique words: 254.0 212.727598566 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.55579868709 0.524837075471 106% => OK
syllable_count: 737.1 618.680645161 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 15.0 9.59856630824 156% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.6003584229 117% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.5392166764 48.9658058833 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.9583333333 100.406767564 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0416666667 20.6045352989 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.25 5.45110844103 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 12.0 4.88709677419 246% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.123635324035 0.236089414692 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0351168875498 0.076458572812 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.041655504632 0.0737576698707 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0813252048532 0.150856017488 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0490064214616 0.0645574589148 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 11.7677419355 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 58.1214874552 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.95 10.9000537634 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.79 8.01818996416 110% => OK
difficult_words: 122.0 86.8835125448 140% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 83.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 25.0 Out of 30
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