Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? A person`s childhood years (the time from birth to twelve years of age) are the most important years of a person`s life. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
When it comes to the issue that whether childhood is the important ages for human, some people agree with this idea because children more learn and their character is flexible. However, others have the opposite view. As far as I am concerned, the former point carries more weight. I take this position on account for the following reasons.
First and the most important reason is that children learn more and better. It is quite normal that a child has not enough knowledge about the real world, so he has a limited world. Therefore, he has much enthusiasm for learning new things, even though they are difficult. I think that a small example can give some light on this topic. Nowadays, many of schools in the Western developed countries use of this fact for increase students’ performance. They start teaching a foreign language to students when they are in elementary schools, because students are capable to easy learn.
A further point we must consider is that our character is melded when we are children. From psychological angle, scientific researches show that our personality likes a whit board that you can writ on it, while wiping your handwriting is impossible. Hence, parents, teachers, and friends are influential persons on a child that they are first one who can write on his white board. His whit board will be blacked and he will not able to change it significantly. I think that there is not a better instance than myself when I was a child. At that time my father was a military man, who tried to have strong personality such as having discipline, being self motive, and making more efforts in all aspects of his life. His behavior indirectly impacted me and my siblings, and shaped our characters. In the later years, I accustomed to have discipline in my work and make more attempts to reach my aim, even though sometimes it was cumbersome. So, my character is shaped in childhood, which is not alterable.
All above evidence supports that childhood is significant for everyone, because most of our fundamental knowledge relate on it as well as our personality is shaped in these years. Last but not least, I hope that parents do not be a dictator and allows them to being independent.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 194, Rule ID: PRP_PAST_PART[3]
Message: Did you mean 'write' or 'be writ'?
Suggestion: write; be writ
...onality likes a whit board that you can writ on it, while wiping your handwriting is...
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Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'first', 'hence', 'however', 'if', 'so', 'therefore', 'thus', 'well', 'while', 'i think', 'such as', 'as well as']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.207943925234 0.229887763892 90% => OK
Verbs: 0.161214953271 0.158761421928 102% => OK
Adjectives: 0.107476635514 0.0866891130778 124% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0490654205607 0.046263068375 106% => OK
Pronouns: 0.10046728972 0.0685040099705 147% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.116822429907 0.118717715034 98% => OK
Participles: 0.0327102803738 0.0351676179071 93% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.73032749734 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Infinitives: 0.018691588785 0.0309702414327 60% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00188951952338 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0700934579439 0.0887237588012 79% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0140186915888 0.0209618222197 67% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0163551401869 0.0139019557991 118% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2223.0 2387.08602151 93% => OK
No of words: 381.0 408.028673835 93% => OK
Chars per words: 5.83464566929 5.86048508987 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.41805628031 4.48200974243 99% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.333333333333 0.338922669872 98% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.244094488189 0.251872472559 97% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.183727034121 0.174417080927 105% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.123359580052 0.112833075102 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73032749734 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 219.0 212.727598566 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.574803149606 0.524397521467 110% => OK
Word variations: 66.7074944968 59.2087087015 113% => OK
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6684587814 102% => OK
Sentence length: 18.1428571429 20.5533526081 88% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.1929484388 48.84282405 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.857142857 120.699889404 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1428571429 20.5533526081 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.619047619048 0.644075263715 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.5376344086 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.54480286738 18% => OK
Readability: 42.5523059618 45.7405998639 93% => OK
Elegance: 1.15037593985 1.45489161554 79% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.228248775461 0.300154397459 76% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0889522725241 0.103427244359 86% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0556825864671 0.0752933317313 74% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.410857852937 0.497263757937 83% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.111091071725 0.151897553556 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0710547726742 0.114077575197 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.05309156679 0.0781384742642 68% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.290475874756 0.336927656856 86% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0294142321331 0.067059652881 44% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.153348595088 0.210909579961 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0374560750624 0.0618886996521 61% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8870967742 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.86379928315 52% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.91756272401 163% => OK
Positive topic words: 11.0 8.42114695341 131% => OK
Negative topic words: 0.0 2.4623655914 0% => More negative topic words wanted.
Neutral topic words: 1.0 2.75985663082 36% => OK
Total topic words: 12.0 13.6433691756 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.