Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Providing Internet access is just as important as other services, such as building roads, so governments should offer Internet access to all of their citizens at no cost.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
The Internet has created a world like a global village--can reach everywhere in a virtually. Personally, I believe that the government should provide the facilities of the internet to its people without any cost. I feel this way for several reasons, which I will explore in the following essays.
To begin with, today each and every work can be performed by the internet. It brings closer to human beings in getting their work works solved, although there were lots of demerits. To be more specific, even small transactions like paying of the bill, transfer of funds from one person to another, investment of share, and so on can be performed on the internet. The Internet is highly important as much as road construction in this modern world. One can easily accomplish his task by living at the same place with the help of the internet. My personal experience is a compelling example of this. I have not taken a foot in the bank in the last two years. I have performed all of my works from mobile banking. We didn't find a group of people making up a line in the bank in the current scenario. In contrast, a few years ago, we should have to sit up a line for hours long, which consumed too much time. This is a boon of the internet, which is why the government should provide its citizen with free internet.
On the same note, the internet gives an update about different types of things, which makes the life of humans easy. It provides information about the political crisis, economic crisis, potential warnings, disasters, and calamities, etc. This is the foremost need of the people to run their basic life with ease. For instance, I have planted maize crops in the last monsoon at my home. During that period there is an epidemic of pest. Nevertheless, the research station has provided a message one month earlier. In light of this, I have sprayed a crop with insecticides at the time of the announcement. As a result, when an insect just sits and start to feed the plants, it eventually. This helps to better manage the crops of not only my field but of the whole district.
Finally, the only things which make a real human, education, can be well-obatained from the internet. By the help of internet, we can have better information about our reading texts and required things. For instance, I am an university student, I should have to regularly search over the internet to performed by research work appropriately. Without the internet, I would not able to proceeds a single step of my research, which provides different past findings and relevant work.
To sum of, I am of the opinion the just like roads, the internet should be joined to each person's home by the government. This is because it allows work to be efficient, faster, and convenient; and because it provides the significant information required for day to day survival.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 713, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: didn't
...all of my works from mobile banking. We didnt find a group of people making up a line...
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Line 4, column 223, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...and required things. For instance, I am an university student, I should have to re...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, if, nevertheless, so, well, for instance, i feel, in contrast, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 9.8082437276 143% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 43.0788530466 93% => OK
Preposition: 81.0 52.1666666667 155% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.0752688172 161% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2349.0 1977.66487455 119% => OK
No of words: 499.0 407.700716846 122% => OK
Chars per words: 4.70741482966 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.72634191566 4.48103885553 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71877350114 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 255.0 212.727598566 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.511022044088 0.524837075471 97% => OK
syllable_count: 729.9 618.680645161 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 21.0 9.59856630824 219% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 7.0 3.08781362007 227% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 9.0 4.94265232975 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 29.0 20.6003584229 141% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.4324362283 48.9658058833 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.0 100.406767564 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2068965517 20.6045352989 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.55172413793 5.45110844103 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 15.0 4.88709677419 307% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.197028841436 0.236089414692 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0544944571494 0.076458572812 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0528716523214 0.0737576698707 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.115488355028 0.150856017488 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0391229815943 0.0645574589148 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.4 11.7677419355 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 58.1214874552 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.74 10.9000537634 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.58 8.01818996416 95% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 86.8835125448 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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