Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Providing Internet access is just as important as other services, such as building roads, so governments should offer Internet access to all of their citizens at no cost.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Nowadays, due to the improvment of science and technology, people need to access to internet in order to ge all their tasks done. and one can cast doubt on the important role of government in this procedure and providing good opportunity. The controversial question which arises here is whether, the government shoul offer Internet access withou any cost or not. When it comes to me, it is my firm conviction that it is the better course of action to offer Internet access at cost. To support this, there are several reasons two of which are going to be aptly explored in the following.
First and foremost, the most prominent reason which comes to my mind is that, all citizens have the right to benefit from services which are provided for them from the government. Although, nowadays, most activities get done fater and in an efficient way by using Internet, there some people which never use Internet; as a result the situation will not be fair for all people in a country. As an illustration, take the example of me and my grandmother. My grandmother does not have smartphone, and also she never spends her time surfing on Internet, on the other hand, I spend most of my time chatting with friends online, and also I participate in many online workshops. having access to free Internet benefit me in a large aspects, but my grandmother never gain any advantages from that.
Furthermore, another noteworthy reason that should be taken into account is that having access to Internet without any payment can have bad effects on some people, especially youngsters. Young people spend a significant part of their time on social media and online chatrooms, if they be forced to pay for their cosumption, they will be more appreciable and careful. In consequence, they can save their time and spend on other practical activieties such as reading books and articles, which are more beneficial for their professional and personal lives. Only with considering cost, it is possible to prevent the dire consequences of having access to Internet.
Needless to say, having access to free Internet is beneficial for some businesses, and can be considered as a financial support for them from the government, and also help them to stay at business. But, its disadvantages gains the weight and it is more prudent course of action to provide citizens with Internet access at cost.
In short, all the aforementioned reasons lead us to the conclusion that, offering Internet access to all citizen at no cost has some drawbacks and is better to not be provided. The fact that this prodecure would not be fair for all poeple to help them have better lives, coupled with its bad consequenses on the some people and wasting their time, is the reason which strengthens my claim.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, if, so, then, in short, such as, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 15.1003584229 146% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 13.8261648746 145% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.0286738351 136% => OK
Pronoun: 45.0 43.0788530466 104% => OK
Preposition: 64.0 52.1666666667 123% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.0752688172 161% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2295.0 1977.66487455 116% => OK
No of words: 470.0 407.700716846 115% => OK
Chars per words: 4.8829787234 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.65612321451 4.48103885553 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7637511659 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Unique words: 232.0 212.727598566 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.493617021277 0.524837075471 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 710.1 618.680645161 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 6.0 1.86738351254 321% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 20.1344086022 129% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 44.9306736217 48.9658058833 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.5 100.406767564 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.1111111111 20.6045352989 127% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.22222222222 5.45110844103 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.314133423728 0.236089414692 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.113876646025 0.076458572812 149% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0685469034503 0.0737576698707 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.196872418872 0.150856017488 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0417287810832 0.0645574589148 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 11.7677419355 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 58.1214874552 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.1575268817 121% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.32 10.9000537634 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.29 8.01818996416 103% => OK
difficult_words: 100.0 86.8835125448 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.0537634409 123% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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