Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Providing Internet access is just as important as other services, such as building roads, so governments should offer Internet access to all of their citizens at no cost.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
There are tons of services to serve the country, no matter what a nation chooses ultimately it should be critical for the development and advancement of that nation. Where some countries still consider the internet as a financial burden to the national economy others contemplate it as a personal right that no one should be deprived of. The Internet has revolutionized the world with never-ending innovation and creativity. If I were asked I would definitely of the opinion that every government should give equal consideration to the availability of internet or provision of any other service and it should be provided free of cost as a right to everyone. My firm belief on this is for several reasons which I will explore in subsequent paragraphs.
To begin with, the Internet provides a myriad of advantages that are extremely helpful for the development of a well-established society. With the advent of technology, learning trend is changed, now students have a distinctive approach to distance learning, they are able to access educative are advanced courses internationally and can apply for scholarship programs abroad. It is preposterous to imagine all of this without the internet. and it is not only limited to education, but organizations also perform their multi-tasks on the internet, it facilitate employment to youth which progressively will decline the unemployment rate in our country. As a result, the crime rate in the country would be suppressed too. All this is possible if everyone has access to free internet.
The second rationale behind this opinion is rooted in the fact that the internet expedites communication between people. Social interaction plays a fundamental role in the development of a healthy lifestyle amongst people and healthy people are productive for a country. When communicating with each other they pour their hearts out to their loved ones and that aids in relieving their depression and anxiety which is a major ailment in our society. My own experience in this matter is a compelling example of this. Five years ago, when I started my to live in a hostel away from my family, I do not have internet or any mean to communicate with my family, it created severe anxiety and stress in me as result I could not perform well in my studies too. Then, my parents bought me an internet phone which enabled our communication in my hostel. As a result, my stress is released too and I was abled to study attentively. If I had not got internet access I would have never overcome my depression.
In light of the above-mentioned reasons, I strongly believe that the internet is not only a stairway to a better society, but is also a great source of communication.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to trend'
Suggestion: to trend
...With the advent of technology, learning trend is changed, now students have a distinc...
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Line 3, column 441, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: And
...agine all of this without the internet. and it is not only limited to education, bu...
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Line 3, column 551, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'facilitates'?
Suggestion: facilitates
...m their multi-tasks on the internet, it facilitate employment to youth which progressively...
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Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...o and I was abled to study attentively. If I had not got internet access I would ...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...and I was abled to study attentively. If I had not got internet access I would ha...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, second, so, still, then, well, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 15.1003584229 146% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.0286738351 127% => OK
Pronoun: 51.0 43.0788530466 118% => OK
Preposition: 57.0 52.1666666667 109% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.0752688172 211% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2254.0 1977.66487455 114% => OK
No of words: 453.0 407.700716846 111% => OK
Chars per words: 4.97571743929 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.61343653406 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.10458007118 2.67179642975 116% => OK
Unique words: 239.0 212.727598566 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.527593818985 0.524837075471 101% => OK
syllable_count: 739.8 618.680645161 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.2494897938 48.9658058833 125% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.7 100.406767564 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.65 20.6045352989 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.6 5.45110844103 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.224866450552 0.236089414692 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0699840522303 0.076458572812 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0519282221576 0.0737576698707 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.128540635688 0.150856017488 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0580239941129 0.0645574589148 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 11.7677419355 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 58.1214874552 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.1575268817 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.9 10.9000537634 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.05 8.01818996416 113% => OK
difficult_words: 124.0 86.8835125448 143% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 10.002688172 155% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 90.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 27.0 Out of 30
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