Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Providing Internet access is just as important as other services, such as building roads, so governments should offer Internet access to all of their citizens at no cost.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
I strongly agree that providing Internet is just as important as other services, such as building roads, so government should offer Internet access to all of their citizens at no cost.
Some people think that Internet is not as important as other services such a s building roads. To support their point, they cite we can live without the Internet. However, I disagree with these people and believe that internet is as important as building roads. I will support my viewpoints with three reasons.
First of all, government should offer Internet access to all of their citizens at no cost because all of the students may not afford Internet access to take online classes. In this corona period, majority of the university are gone online. In order to take online courses, a student must have an Internet access. If a student does not have money to get an Internet access, he or she may not be able to take Education. For example, my friend's university went online due to the Corona Lockdown in the city, but since he did not have enough money to afford Internet, he could not able attend online University classes. In contrast, if the internet were provided by the government to all of their citizens at no cost, my friend would have taken the online courses. So, governements should offer Internet access to all of their citizens at no cost.
Second of all, governments should offer free Internet to all of their citizens because it will help to export more goods and services to other nations. In internet, people can find so many free online courses that enhance their skills. For instance, my brother learnt an efficient way to make chairs from Internet. He later founded a company in my country and started large scale production of chairs. Now he exports large number of chairs to neighboring countries like China and India. He pays huge amount of revenue as a tax to my country and has significantly contributed to the country's economy. In contrast, if the government had not provided free internet service, he could not have learnt the skill since he did not have money to get the internet access. So, it is important to increase a country's export of goods.
Third of all, governments should offer Internet access to all of their citizen at no cost because it will
encourage them to do online jobs. When people start to do job online, it will reduce the number of commuting vehicles in the city as a result it will considerably helps to lessen carbon emission. For example, I have started to do job online, as a result the carbon emission that I used to produce from my car is no more pouring in the atmosphere.
To conclude, in this era, the internet is must to have to all of the citizens of a country. Since, from internet, citizens can take online classes, can develop skills and contribute to the country's economy, governments should offer internet to all of their citizens at no cost.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: an
...not as important as other services such a s building roads. To support their poin...
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Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
...ll of their citizens at no cost because all of the students may not afford Internet access...
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Suggestion:
...ld offer Internet access to all of their citizens at no cost. Second of all, ...
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...ignificantly contributed to the countrys economy. In contrast, if the government ...
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...their citizen at no cost because it will encourage them to do online jobs. When p...
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...obs. When people start to do job online, it will reduce the number of commuting ...
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...ob online, it will reduce the number of commuting vehicles in the city as a resu...
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Suggestion: help
...e city as a result it will considerably helps to lessen carbon emission. For example,...
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...ring in the atmosphere. To conclude, in this era, the internet is must to hav...
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Message: After 'must', the verb is used without 'to'. Probably, you should use 'must' or 'have to' here.
Suggestion: must; have to
...conclude, in this era, the internet is must to have to all of the citizens of a countr...
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Message: Simply use 'all the'.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, may, second, so, third, for example, for instance, in contrast, such as, as a result, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 15.1003584229 60% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 22.0 9.8082437276 224% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 46.0 43.0788530466 107% => OK
Preposition: 76.0 52.1666666667 146% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2415.0 1977.66487455 122% => OK
No of words: 508.0 407.700716846 125% => OK
Chars per words: 4.75393700787 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.74751043592 4.48103885553 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55710631429 2.67179642975 96% => OK
Unique words: 208.0 212.727598566 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.409448818898 0.524837075471 78% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 757.8 618.680645161 122% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 15.0 9.59856630824 156% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.94265232975 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 20.6003584229 121% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.2149296053 48.9658058833 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.6 100.406767564 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.32 20.6045352989 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.92 5.45110844103 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.53405017921 154% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 11.0 5.5376344086 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.85842293907 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.47760209188 0.236089414692 202% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.163602427319 0.076458572812 214% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.167184727528 0.0737576698707 227% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.307286360184 0.150856017488 204% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.166183826086 0.0645574589148 257% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 11.7677419355 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 58.1214874552 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.27 10.9000537634 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.27 8.01818996416 91% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 86.8835125448 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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