Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Providing Internet access is just as important as other services, such as building roads, so governments should offer Internet access to all of their citizens at no cost.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
The internet has turned into an inseperable part of our lives. We exploit its advantages in every aspect of our daily lives. Although, it delivers so many advantages and has turned to an essential part of our lives, some argue that the governments should take initiative to obstruct its usage. Although there might be several advantages to free provision of internet to the citizens, I believe that internet should not be made free by the governments.
The first challenge that comes to mind is the cost of the free provision of internet. There are several costs to providing internet to the people such as the infrastructure or the costs of services. Governments will likely charge all the citizens for it while some will still not use them. For instance, they will impose higher taxes on other incomes to compensate for the money. This will not be fair to those who do not use the internet.
In addition to that, the government will likely apply techniques for surveilance of the people through the internet. Since they are the providers, they will be under pressure to observe what people do with that. It is obvious that governments are trying to use any tools they posses to have absolute control on their people and a free internet provides them with one.
Lastly, this will fascilitate the misuse of the internet by the younger generation. Although, internet has so many beneficial sources to study and educate people, it also contains materials that are harmful and children should be strictly supervised while using it. Nowadays, parents overlook the consumption of internet by children by blocking certain sites on the server or choosing service providers that block harmful sites. If there is free internet, children can access internet from everywhere and can misuse it.
All in all, although there are several advantages to the internet, but it is not a smart idea to make it free for everybody. The amount of costs that is involved with it, the likelihood of it being exploited by the government, or misused by the children are among the reasons why it should be restricted. Yet, it does not mean that governments should not fascilitate the usage of internet for those who will rightfully use it.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 386, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to service'
Suggestion: to service
...certain sites on the server or choosing service providers that block harmful sites. If ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, lastly, look, so, still, while, for instance, in addition, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 15.1003584229 119% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 9.8082437276 163% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 43.0788530466 95% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 52.1666666667 94% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1848.0 1977.66487455 93% => OK
No of words: 375.0 407.700716846 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.928 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40055868397 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67734661351 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 212.727598566 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.482666666667 0.524837075471 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 584.1 618.680645161 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.8104233348 48.9658058833 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.2631578947 100.406767564 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7368421053 20.6045352989 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.63157894737 5.45110844103 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.267525731073 0.236089414692 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.091114276212 0.076458572812 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0447508873178 0.0737576698707 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.156067274782 0.150856017488 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0361951118425 0.0645574589148 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 11.7677419355 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 58.1214874552 90% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.31 10.9000537634 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.12 8.01818996416 101% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 86.8835125448 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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