Do you agree or disagree with the following statement: “Reading the newspaper or online news sources is a waste of time.” Provide reasons and examples to support your opinion.
Reading is a great opportunity that can enhance your life quality. Reading can strengthen person’s characteristic and knowledge. Some people concur that reading newspaper is a waste of time. While, other disagree. However, Generally speaking I aver that reading newspaper is wasting of time and I feel this way for several of reasons some of which will be explained in the following paragraphs.
The first exquisite reason to be mentioned is that is not convenient. To be more specific searching for information that you want might take plenty of time from you to find the information that you are looking for. In the other hand, online new sources have search engine so it’s easier and faster. An experience which can be used to shed light on this subject matter is one of my own. When i was in my dental school i needed to do research project for my dental graduation. I was living alone in small apartment that doesn’t have an internet so I used to struggle and waste my time in searching different kind of dental newspapers to complete my graduation research project. If I had I had online new source in my home so I would save my time and have comfortable life. As a result we can see how reading newspaper can impact your life in a negative way; it can makes your life harder.
Moreover, although the aforementioned reason was the first one to cross the mind, it is by no means the only reason available. Another subtle point which has to borne in mind is reading newspaper can give old news because different newspapers have different regulations and rules. Some newspapers arrive every week, others arrive every day. Reading newspapers waste your time ; if you want most updated newspaper, then you would need to wait for the most recent newspapers or read the old newspapers. On the contrary, online news sources update news each second. My own personal experience is a vivid example of this. When I was in my home country we had war in 2003 so in that time we had bad internet connection. I wanted to know what is happening in Baghdad. I used to read newspaper which had old media because I didn’t has online news sources. If I have online new sources, then I wouldn’t need to wait for the most recent news. This personal experience taught me reading newspaper can give you low-quality of life.
To sum up, contemplating the above mentioned reasoning and examples, reading newspapers is a waste of time overweighs online new sources. Furthermore, I would like to contend that newspapers institution should stop publish newspaper because that waste our community time. By reading online news source, we can get more accurate and advanced media and invest their time in different methods.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, however, if, look, moreover, second, so, then, while, as to, i feel, kind of, as a result, on the contrary, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 15.1003584229 132% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 9.8082437276 173% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 11.0286738351 145% => OK
Pronoun: 59.0 43.0788530466 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 46.0 52.1666666667 88% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.0752688172 136% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2272.0 1977.66487455 115% => OK
No of words: 467.0 407.700716846 115% => OK
Chars per words: 4.86509635974 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.64867537961 4.48103885553 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78889540457 2.67179642975 104% => OK
Unique words: 220.0 212.727598566 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.471092077088 0.524837075471 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 715.5 618.680645161 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 3.51792114695 199% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 27.0 20.6003584229 131% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 43.124282066 48.9658058833 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.1481481481 100.406767564 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2962962963 20.6045352989 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.07407407407 5.45110844103 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 5.5376344086 253% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.85842293907 259% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.88709677419 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.336487045688 0.236089414692 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.096060237787 0.076458572812 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0629843720727 0.0737576698707 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.231692201585 0.150856017488 154% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0385303652995 0.0645574589148 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 11.7677419355 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 58.1214874552 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.67 10.9000537634 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.59 8.01818996416 95% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 86.8835125448 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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