Do you agree or disagree with the following statement: The rules children have to follow nowadays are too strict
In and large, implementing rules to the children is inevitable fact in the society. Because it significantly impacts their obedience. So there has been no shortage of debate whether or not rules really impact on children. However, my question is does is really important for children to obey the rules. Some people believe it is not necessary to follow the rules because the children from the current generation are doing multitask. so it is hard to follow, On the other hand, I personally feel children should follow the rules uncompromisingly for reasons I will explore in the following essay.
To begin with, most of the young adults from the present generation are spoiled because parents want to be friend with their children rather than disciplinarians. If the parents are permissive to their children; eventually they don't obey parents words, as a result, they take wrong decision which spoils their life. Consider my spoiled nephew as an example of this. Since he is the only child, his parents abundantly gave him freedom such as giving expensive gifts for his birthday like I phone, video games, and excessive pocket money; eventually, he stared playing games in the class and not pay attention to classes as a result he got less grades. On top of that, he addicted to drugs which leads to psychiatric problems
In addition to that, teachers from the present generation are more flexible with children because they are not punishing the students for their mistake such as not doing home working, irregular to classes and so on. my personal life is the best example to illustrate this. when I was studying third grade, my school teachers are very strict and they are not even bear a single mistake. especially, irregular to classes and not finishing homework. however, the current situation is the opposite, the teachers are very flexible .
In conclusion, people should take care of their children and make them follow the rules for a better future. if not their carrier might be spoil. so I feel parents and teachers should teach discipline for their better future.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, really, so, third, i feel, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as a result, to begin with, on the other hand, on top of that
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 15.1003584229 132% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 36.0 43.0788530466 84% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 52.1666666667 69% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1733.0 1977.66487455 88% => OK
No of words: 348.0 407.700716846 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.97988505747 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31911543099 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6661702507 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 212.727598566 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.534482758621 0.524837075471 102% => OK
syllable_count: 532.8 618.680645161 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 71.5821206727 48.9658058833 146% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.2777777778 100.406767564 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3333333333 20.6045352989 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.66666666667 5.45110844103 141% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 5.5376344086 235% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.188553843753 0.236089414692 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0603116703937 0.076458572812 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0777052691923 0.0737576698707 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.116615250203 0.150856017488 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0918935686032 0.0645574589148 142% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 11.7677419355 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 58.1214874552 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.6 10.9000537634 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.89 8.01818996416 98% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 86.8835125448 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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