some people believe parents are the best teacher and others not. which one do you agree? support with examples and reasons
Our entire education system is based on what we accumulate each day of our life. So, there has been no shortage of debate about when and how the parents role important in their children’s education. However, the question is does the parents are good teachers? Some people believe parents never become good teachers; probably they don’t have prior knowledge about the subjects. On the other hand I personally feel parents consistently become good teachers for reasons I will explore in the following essay.
To begin with, almost for sure our parents are the best teachers at the beginning of our lives, which actually corresponds to the parents role in nature. Parents are most committed and involved in teaching their children; they have a kind on instinct to sacrifices their life for their children betterment. My friend Alex mother is a best example to illustrates this. When we were studying 3rd grade he couldn’t attend school with his health issues. His mother sacrifices her job and stay with him at home. On the top of that, she tough all subjects to him very patiently, as a result, he got highest grade in class without attending classes. MY principal appreciated her at parents meeting; he said that the whole credit goes his mother.
In addition to that, even though the parents are not specialized in education, their role in teaching their children to be aware of the need of improving their knowledge. In fact, our parents probably don’t know anything about math, science and chemistry but they are very much involved in giving a lessons about being a independent, self confidence, strong and confidence those are very important to success in carrier. MY personal life experience is a best example to illustrate this. When I was studying high school, at Omak public school I failed in two subjects and then I didn’t attend couple months to school with guilty. My parents are really supported me at that point, their words and suggestion make me to go to school again. They said never give up in life those words illuminate me to complete my graduation. Now I am working as a Health informatics specialist.
In conclusion, although some people disagree with my Idea, I personally feel parents are always a best teachers because their lessons are last forever. Even my parents are old now, still I ask their suggestion whenever I need based on their life experience.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 146, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'parents'' or 'parent's'?
Suggestion: parents'; parent's
...ortage of debate about when and how the parents role important in their children's...
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'parents'' or 'parent's'?
Suggestion: parents'; parent's
...ives, which actually corresponds to the parents role in nature. Parents are most commit...
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Line 2, column 333, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[1]
Message: Use 'the' with the superlative.
Suggestion: the
...en betterment. My friend Alex mother is a best example to illustrates this. When ...
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Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'got the highest'.
Suggestion: got the highest
... to him very patiently, as a result, he got highest grade in class without attending classe...
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Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a lesson' or simply 'lessons'?
Suggestion: a lesson; lessons
...t they are very much involved in giving a lessons about being a independent, self confide...
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Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...nvolved in giving a lessons about being a independent, self confidence, strong an...
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Message: Use 'the' with the superlative.
Suggestion: the
...carrier. MY personal life experience is a best example to illustrate this. When I...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ing as a Health informatics specialist. In conclusion, although some people disa...
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Message: Use 'the' with the superlative.
Suggestion: the
...a, I personally feel parents are always a best teachers because their lessons are...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, however, if, really, so, still, then, in addition, in conclusion, in fact, as a result, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 15.1003584229 126% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 60.0 43.0788530466 139% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 53.0 52.1666666667 102% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.0752688172 173% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2007.0 1977.66487455 101% => OK
No of words: 404.0 407.700716846 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.96782178218 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.48327461151 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73404843251 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 217.0 212.727598566 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.537128712871 0.524837075471 102% => OK
syllable_count: 612.9 618.680645161 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 15.0 9.59856630824 156% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.6140949805 48.9658058833 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.5714285714 100.406767564 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2380952381 20.6045352989 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.42857142857 5.45110844103 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.5376344086 163% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.196793114246 0.236089414692 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0614050887301 0.076458572812 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0594786930145 0.0737576698707 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.130158430269 0.150856017488 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0362548325523 0.0645574589148 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 11.7677419355 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 58.1214874552 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.55 10.9000537634 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.1 8.01818996416 101% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 86.8835125448 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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