Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? The rules that societies today expect young people to follow and obey are too strict. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Humans have been living in settlements for a long period of time. In order to keep this system, some rules are required to be obeyed by all the individual, but some younger ones see these rules too strict or even old fashion and because of that, they start to guard against those. I think these rules aren't as much hard as it sounds so I disagree with this statement. I bring my two main reasons to support my idea in the subsequent essay.
First, living together require some harmonies, so for achieving those we need to set some rules and expect everyone obey it. Like the nature, which represent a beautiful balance in it, cities, which are humans representative, Have to show the balance in it. In order to thrive, some rules must taken in place to make a flourishing and profound place for human beings. Good example of this relies in the history. For example, human usually makes a qualitative step in times that everything is in order so only by having rules he can go through this process. Ancient Greeks produce the fundamentals of today called democracy because they were encountered a steady times. Greeks did not participate in wars with their neighbors, so they focused on other important aspect of life such as philosophy, literatures, plays, etc. Imagine if they had a turbulence society, the wouldn't achieve anything mentioned above. They achived profound nation because of their rules which were accepted by all the individuals.
Moreover, younger generations usually because of their nature that wants to be free do not obey the rules so they have a defence mechanism towards rules. To overcome this issue, parents should take the first steps to convice kids. They should brings adequate reasons to convince their child, because children trust their parents more than anyone else. I have a personal example which is suited for this topic. About ten years ago, when I was still a kid. I remember that I don't care about school's routine so the result would be easy to imagine that I had encounter many troubles. One day, that I was sent out by schools, my dad asked me why I am making problems for myself, and he continued the reasons why we should respect the rules whether we like them or not because as a civilize people we all need to obey rules in order to work accordingly together. Like a colony, every single individual has to fulfil the requirements which are handed to him in order to make colony thrive. I remember that after that conversation I had with my dad it helped me to understand the meaning of the existence of these rules, so I completely changed my behavior and accept the rules which helping me to choose my path correctly.
In conclusion as I said, the rules that are set are not so hard to obey for youth generation. As I said, by accepting rules making situation to thrive in and also discipline brings calmness that is required by society.
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- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement The rules that societies today expect young people to follow and obey are too strict Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer 90
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Message: Did you mean 'have taken' or 'take'?
Suggestion: have taken; take
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Message: The verb 'should' requires the base form of the verb: 'bring'
Suggestion: bring
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, but, first, if, moreover, so, still, as to, for example, i think, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 17.0 11.0286738351 154% => OK
Pronoun: 71.0 43.0788530466 165% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 68.0 52.1666666667 130% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2381.0 1977.66487455 120% => OK
No of words: 507.0 407.700716846 124% => OK
Chars per words: 4.69625246548 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.74517233601 4.48103885553 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55674714998 2.67179642975 96% => OK
Unique words: 271.0 212.727598566 127% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.534516765286 0.524837075471 102% => OK
syllable_count: 769.5 618.680645161 124% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.6003584229 117% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.0401641682 48.9658058833 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.2083333333 100.406767564 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.125 20.6045352989 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.45833333333 5.45110844103 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.5376344086 126% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.88709677419 184% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.130156540902 0.236089414692 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0362336265967 0.076458572812 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0341052628528 0.0737576698707 46% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0896070712238 0.150856017488 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.034414459414 0.0645574589148 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 11.7677419355 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 58.1214874552 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.98 10.9000537634 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.26 8.01818996416 103% => OK
difficult_words: 115.0 86.8835125448 132% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.002688172 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 90.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 27.0 Out of 30
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