Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
The rules that societies today expect young people to follow and obey are too strict.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
As society has changed at an unprecedented rate, the importance of the rules for young people has been widely debated. Some people claim that those rules are too harsh on young people, while others believe that those restrictions can actually benefit them to some extent. After deeply deliberating such a problem, I firmly believe that the rules that society expects young people are not strict at all.
First of all, the rules can help improve young people' s performances and abilities. With those regulations, young people maintain their behavior and head to the right paths. However, in contrast, if those rules did not exist, then the young can gradually get lost in the pursuit of their dreams. I am a vivid example of this. When I was in high school, I got rather rebellious and did not want to study. However, with the rules on behavior in my school, I was taught by my teachers to not behave badly and also helped me to convert my thoughts. Eventually, I was back in track and never did those behaviors again.
Secondly, due to the development of society, the rules nowadays have lessened. Older people are now more open-minded to let young people make mistakes. Moreover, people recently see the mistakes as stepping stones towards success. They believe young people can gradually learn from the faults they make. Here comes a concrete example. My dad always claims that because of his failure in his first investments, which made him lose a huge amount of fortune, that made him keep in mind to be careful when making decisions. And for now, he has succeeded in his career.
Last but not least, young people nowadays have their own interpretations of the rules of society. They may not consider the rules as their burden but their motto to help them face the difficulties they encounter. For instance, some words are often talked by older people, which may make us feel dull and stressed, but when we look from the other side, those words may seem to be encouraging.
All in all, given the reasons above, I definitely disagree that the rules that society expects young people are too strict. That is not to say other opinions are out of merits. Nevertheless, I believe that my points of view are fully capable of firmly supporting my position.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, first, however, if, look, may, moreover, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, then, while, for instance, in contrast, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.0286738351 136% => OK
Pronoun: 51.0 43.0788530466 118% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 52.1666666667 84% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1875.0 1977.66487455 95% => OK
No of words: 391.0 407.700716846 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.79539641944 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44676510885 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5278144111 2.67179642975 95% => OK
Unique words: 208.0 212.727598566 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.531969309463 0.524837075471 101% => OK
syllable_count: 574.2 618.680645161 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.59856630824 146% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.4389568589 48.9658058833 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.5217391304 100.406767564 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0 20.6045352989 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.52173913043 5.45110844103 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.2028978395 0.236089414692 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0611832584302 0.076458572812 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0681730344739 0.0737576698707 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.12464251176 0.150856017488 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0629142925504 0.0645574589148 97% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 11.7677419355 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 58.1214874552 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.26 10.9000537634 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.83 8.01818996416 98% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 86.8835125448 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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