Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? The rules that societies today expect young people to follow and obey are too strict. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
A Society generally have a variety of rules which are accepted by all members of that society. Some people hold negative perspective toward the imperative of obeying rules by young members. While others have a strong belief that youth should follow the rules, which are not too strict, and it is of necessitate. I subscribe to this group, and I think it is better for young people's own sake to accept these rules and avoid any disobeying.
To begin with, regarding to the past, there is no noticeable changing in rules which youth should be committed to them. Presently, technology has brought about many different changes, but the radical principle is remained the same as the past decades. Our parents and grandparents were obligated to many rules provided by society, and now we can observe the results of their commitments in their characters and their influence on the society. Of course, they have thrived, and this fact should encourage young people to follow their ancestors' path. My personal experience is a compelling example of what I mean. Each time I decided to hang out with my friends at night, my parents warned me to come back home before mid-night. In that ages, around twenties, I become frustrated of obeying such a strict rule. However, after ten years, I have understood about what my parents tried to do, they wanted to protect me. They, also had followed the same rule as me in their youth, and I gratify their attention and strongly believe that adolescents should not defy the social rules.
What's more, in order to avoid any chaos in society, every member of it should follow its regulations. In fact, if anyone refuses to obey the rules, the whole society will confront many serious problems, and young people are not exceptional. For instance, the rules about smoking cigarettes in public places which is necessary for all members in a society.
To put in a nutshell, I firmly believe that the rules running in the society is not too strict for youth and they should obey them. For their future lives and the condition of society, it is obligatory. In addition, following the rules help throughout of the society to remain in a tranquility and peace.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, regarding, so, while, for instance, i mean, i think, in addition, in fact, of course, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 42.0 43.0788530466 97% => OK
Preposition: 58.0 52.1666666667 111% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1810.0 1977.66487455 92% => OK
No of words: 375.0 407.700716846 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.82666666667 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40055868397 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58239647528 2.67179642975 97% => OK
Unique words: 204.0 212.727598566 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.544 0.524837075471 104% => OK
syllable_count: 566.1 618.680645161 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 7.0 1.86738351254 375% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 10.0 4.94265232975 202% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.3639875922 48.9658058833 60% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 95.2631578947 100.406767564 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7368421053 20.6045352989 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.47368421053 5.45110844103 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.217775147532 0.236089414692 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0721457959847 0.076458572812 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.049636059722 0.0737576698707 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.151756699145 0.150856017488 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0347774082424 0.0645574589148 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 11.7677419355 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 58.1214874552 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.73 10.9000537634 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.2 8.01818996416 102% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 86.8835125448 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.0 Out of 30
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