Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? The rules that societies today expect young people to follow and obey are too strict. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
It is easy to think that young people are disciplined by stricter rules today. However, I personally disagree with this thought, in that there are more diverse values are being appreciated by the society nowadays. Therefore, young people have more options of their life and career compared to older generations. I will explain further in the following essay.
To begin with, it is obvious that more different life styles are being accepted, and people are welcomed to choose the life style that best fits to their own preferences and needs. For example, same-sex marriage is forbidden in most of the countries before but now it has become a legal status of marriage in lots of democratic countries. As a result, a young person who prefers to marry the same-sex partner will not be discriminated or harmed. This freedom of choosing your own partner regardless their sex is a good illustration to demonstrate that young people are free from strict rules, such as marriage can only happen between man and woman. Hence, I personally believe that younger generation does have more choices than their parents, in that more social values are being appreciated.
Besides of the life style, another angle to indicate the less strict rule on young people is to have more flexibility of their career path. My personal experience is a great illustration of this. I have studied sociology, but I have worked in the large tech firm after graduation. However, now I have decided to change my career from enterprises to academia so I have quit my job and applied for a PhD program to achieve my dream of working in academia. This kind of flexibility of career choice is common among young people but was rare for my parents’ generation, which used to work for one single company for their life time. Furthermore, some young people even choose to do multiple jobs at the same period, which even become a new trend called slash workers. Therefore, this kind of flexibility to develop their own career is another example to support that young people are actually free from stricter rules.
In conclusion, I believe that the rules imposed on young people nowadays are not too strict. This is because the society has developed into a stage that multiple values are being accepted. Consequently, young people can make more decisions, such as who to marry and what to work, based on their personal preferences and will not be judged by the society.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, besides, but, consequently, furthermore, hence, however, if, so, therefore, for example, in conclusion, kind of, such as, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 26.0 15.1003584229 172% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.0286738351 127% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 43.0788530466 95% => OK
Preposition: 56.0 52.1666666667 107% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2026.0 1977.66487455 102% => OK
No of words: 413.0 407.700716846 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.90556900726 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.50803742585 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6297785042 2.67179642975 98% => OK
Unique words: 209.0 212.727598566 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.506053268765 0.524837075471 96% => OK
syllable_count: 646.2 618.680645161 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.4356275379 48.9658058833 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.631578947 100.406767564 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.7368421053 20.6045352989 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.31578947368 5.45110844103 153% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.173398062777 0.236089414692 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0625242993795 0.076458572812 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0560437620378 0.0737576698707 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.124590082577 0.150856017488 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0513684009669 0.0645574589148 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 11.7677419355 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 58.1214874552 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.1575268817 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.2 10.9000537634 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.16 8.01818996416 102% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 86.8835125448 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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