Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? The rules that societies today expect young people to follow and obey are too strict. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Nowadys, the development and the change in a variety of aspect of the society lead to a number of conceptial disagreement among the adult and their children. The adult want their children follow their guildence and have a promising future. The next generation, however, have their own thought and are unwilling to yield to the rules established by their parents. From my perspective, as a member of the next generation, I argue that we should not only obey to those rules without thinking.
First, Some rules come from the tradition and is out of time by now. The new generation should have their own moral discipline and some laws need to be changed. Take the example in my country. In traditional concept, the children are considered to be inferoir to parents, and they are supposed to treat their parents with respect from their heart. Their important event, such as occupition, marriage and so on, should be decided only by their parents. Those ridicurious traditions faded by in the revolution in the transition period between old China to modern China. However, some of parents still hold those corrupted concept and dominate their childrens life. For these concept, they should only be sent to the history meseum.
Many adults suppose their children to obey their rules without any requirement to themselves. Those cases are enormous in daily life. For instance, parents always ask their kids not to speak dirty words while themselves failed to be an example in home. The children can be a mirror to their parents, and every bad behavior is no more than the reflection of the environment in which the children grow. Therefore, Some rules should only be applied to kids after the parents doing so. Asteroids are large space objects made of rock and ice. There are hundreds of thousands of asteroids in our solar system. Though we often hear ideas about establishing colonies of humans to live and work on our Moon or our neighboring planet, Mars, some think that sending people to an asteroid would actually be the best colonization option for a number of reasons Low Gravity To begin with, asteroids are often much smaller than planets, so they have lower gravity
It is true that some tradition play an essential role in the development and stability of the nation. For example, some traditional moral rules teach us treat others with polite. However, we should reconsider the position of those rules out of time.
In a nutshell.I agree with the opinion that the societies does apply excessive rules on the young peoples, and some of those rules should be abandoned.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: After 'some of', you should use 'the' ('some of the parents') or simply say ''some parents''.
Suggestion: some of the parents; some parents
...een old China to modern China. However, some of parents still hold those corrupted concept and ...
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Message: Did you mean 'this concept' or 'these concepts'?
Suggestion: this concept; these concepts
... and dominate their childrens life. For these concept, they should only be sent to the histor...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: I
...ose rules out of time. In a nutshell.I agree with the opinion that the societi...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, first, however, if, so, still, therefore, while, for example, for instance, such as, it is true, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 15.1003584229 126% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 43.0 43.0788530466 100% => OK
Preposition: 66.0 52.1666666667 127% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 8.0752688172 223% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2153.0 1977.66487455 109% => OK
No of words: 436.0 407.700716846 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.9380733945 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.56953094068 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58362677337 2.67179642975 97% => OK
Unique words: 227.0 212.727598566 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.520642201835 0.524837075471 99% => OK
syllable_count: 669.6 618.680645161 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 6.0 3.08781362007 194% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 80.2360176325 48.9658058833 164% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.6086956522 100.406767564 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.9565217391 20.6045352989 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.21739130435 5.45110844103 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 11.8709677419 42% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 12.0 4.88709677419 246% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0959828111153 0.236089414692 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0311166178326 0.076458572812 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0362470043116 0.0737576698707 49% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0740636449054 0.150856017488 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0465521041779 0.0645574589148 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 11.7677419355 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 58.1214874552 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.37 10.9000537634 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.37 8.01818996416 104% => OK
difficult_words: 106.0 86.8835125448 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.0 Out of 30
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