Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? The rules that societies today expect young people to follow and obey are too strict. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
As some people may hold the view that the rules that societies today expect young people to follow and obey are too strict and hard to follow; however, others believe that obeying those rules is just a piece of cake.
As I am one of those young people who are trying their best to cope with the society rules those days, I agree with the first opinion. Among countless reasons that support my view, I will delve into the most conspicuous ones in the following essay.
The first exquisite reason to be mentioned is that young people have to work so hard to catch up with the constantly and rapidly changing world around them. We are expected to study well and get high scores, find good jobs to support our families, help others and be of good use to society, dream and achieve our goals, be patient, eat well and exercise regularly to have good health, acquire good communication skills, sympathize with others without being negatively affected or depressed, stay updated with news, learn how to use technology wisely, and avoid lots and lots of temptations around us. I guess It is crystal clear now how young people struggle in life to survive with dignity. There is neither present nor will be future for those who are weak or lazy. That's why I feel pity for our generation and the following generations as well.
The second reason, one should take into account the fact that many of the aforementioned loads were not there a few decades ago. I remember I have had a conversation with my grandmother recently, she was telling me how life was much easier before and though we have more qualifications to make our tasks easier and have better quality of lives, our ancestors had not much to worry about as we have now. They used to work and earn money that was enough for there living, had quality family time and used to appreciate every single blessing they had. There was not much competition to prove oneself, people used to wish each other the best from their hearts and they all lived in peace. On the other hand, hatred is spread between us now, we fight each other and kill each other for non sense, we envy one another, we don't respect others' opinions, we may not accept people of different religion, race or ethnicity, and above all we have to pretend that we love and care for others. Even though, in many times, we feel desperate and lonely, we laugh and act as if there is nothing not to be categorized as weak or judged by others as losers.
To wrap it up, all the previously mentioned reasons and examples clearly illustrate how young people carry heavy loads on their shoulders and that the rules of life nowadays are too harsh to obey and survive smoothly at the same time.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, may, second, so, well, i feel, i guess, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 15.1003584229 146% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 28.0 13.8261648746 203% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 52.0 43.0788530466 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 58.0 52.1666666667 111% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2219.0 1977.66487455 112% => OK
No of words: 485.0 407.700716846 119% => OK
Chars per words: 4.57525773196 4.8611393121 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.69283662038 4.48103885553 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.32174103938 2.67179642975 87% => OK
Unique words: 261.0 212.727598566 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.538144329897 0.524837075471 103% => OK
syllable_count: 699.3 618.680645161 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.59856630824 146% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 32.0 20.1344086022 159% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 95.8896588098 48.9658058833 196% => OK
Chars per sentence: 147.933333333 100.406767564 147% => OK
Words per sentence: 32.3333333333 20.6045352989 157% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.13333333333 5.45110844103 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.85842293907 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.23317263851 0.236089414692 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0854445805813 0.076458572812 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0942781598389 0.0737576698707 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.182605166436 0.150856017488 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.11421328197 0.0645574589148 177% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.3 11.7677419355 139% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.92 58.1214874552 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 10.1575268817 132% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.88 10.9000537634 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.02 8.01818996416 100% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 86.8835125448 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 10.002688172 125% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.8 10.0537634409 147% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 81.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.5 Out of 30
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