Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
The rules that societies today expect young people to follow and obey are too strict.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
In my points of view, I stand for this argument that the rules that societies today expect young people to follow and obey are too strict. Although, nowadays, there are always controversies about how young people of this generation behave, each group gain their own thoughts towards it which base on certain reasonable aspects, with on doubt the part who force young people to stick in the "old fashion" is to serious and out of date somewhat.
Time goes by, the environment of social sure changes. As everything, such as art, technology, is updating with the trend how time changes, no reason for the rules of people`s behavior not to follow it. Therefor, young generation do have right to choose the way they act. For example, homosexual used to be forbid by the religions, and LGBT community can only survive in the dark side with no chance to come to the outer stage and be themselves, speak for themselves. But with the awareness of this community processed, we now know that it is not a kind of illness, on the contrary actually, they born this way. In this case, they no longer need to hide in the corner, societies cannot just disgrace them and limit their right to chase their nature. Old perspectives are wrong and unfair.
To enhance the point that young people are under too much strict requirement, I am going to raise another fact of it, which the young generation are being put more expectation than the past time were. They are expected to be the top one of the class, enter well-known university, obtain high position in occupation, aiming to lead a better life meanwhile their parents failed to have. Thus, following with the over anticipation, hash rules arrive. As a matter of fact, the way people define what success twists, they forget to count the health and happiness into it. A life with wealth and fortune but no healthy body and a lot stress and one with an glad mood but not much money which you will choose?
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'pastime'?
Suggestion: pastime
...are being put more expectation than the past time were. They are expected to be the top o...
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Line 3, column 648, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...lthy body and a lot stress and one with an glad mood but not much money which you ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, if, so, thus, well, while, for example, kind of, such as, as a matter of fact, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 31.0 43.0788530466 72% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 52.1666666667 94% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.0752688172 136% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1611.0 1977.66487455 81% => OK
No of words: 343.0 407.700716846 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.69679300292 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30351707066 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53833246213 2.67179642975 95% => OK
Unique words: 208.0 212.727598566 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.606413994169 0.524837075471 116% => OK
syllable_count: 489.6 618.680645161 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.6003584229 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.1344086022 119% => OK
Sentence length SD: 70.0126810671 48.9658058833 143% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.071428571 100.406767564 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.5 20.6045352989 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.78571428571 5.45110844103 143% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.53405017921 66% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.255960793191 0.236089414692 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0842077274182 0.076458572812 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0938687827386 0.0737576698707 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.180325578626 0.150856017488 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0607856289237 0.0645574589148 94% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 11.7677419355 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.04 58.1214874552 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.28 10.9000537634 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.68 8.01818996416 96% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 86.8835125448 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 10.002688172 145% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.0537634409 115% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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