Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Smartphones have caused more harm than good to our society.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
smartphones that have several pros and cons to society are a major consequence of the development of science and engineering. Personally, I believe that the disadvantages of phones will probably preponderate their downsides. I feel this way for two main reasons, and I will explore these ideas in the subsequent paragraphs.
To begin with, students are ruining their time by using mobile phones instead of learning things, which means their ability to advance society is inadequate. Nowadays, pupils in various kinds of educational organizations such as high schools, colleges, and universities are wasting their invaluable time on unnecessary stuff. they are playing mobile games and constantly checking out social media for hours every day. Therefore, they are not gaining important knowledge that can help them to enhance the situation of current society. On the other hand, if they stop utilizing these high-tech devices, they can understand essential concepts about politics and the condition of social living. As a result, they can use this knowledge to invent significant things, in turn, improve things.
Secondly, the utilization of phones is making youngsters more exposed to corrupting things, so the rate of criminal activity may increase in the near future. Adolescences have easy access to violent scenes and messages when they employ their phone because they can watch whatever movies they want with their phone. Moreover, most of these movies contain unpleasant scenes such as murders and drinking alcohol that might encourage juveniles to carry out these things; thus, their possibility of committing crime in the future is high. consequently, they will start disrupting the whole society by doing unfair things. For instance, my younger brother, who is only six years old, has watched many films about underworlds with his smartphone. I and my parents had been allowing him to see these things without paying in-depth attention until he said that he has wanted to purchase a gun, and kill others. although I told him that such things are disagreeable and perilous, I am still afraid that my sibling will get criminal, and begin violating the law. Furthermore, I am certain that this negative aftermath of phones is not only limited to my brother, but his peers are also affected by it. this example demonstrates the horrible impact of cellphones.
In summation, In my humble opinion, I think that the wide utilization of smartphones will occasion harm to society. this is because learners are nullifying their opportunity to study things and develop society, and children are being corrupted by things that can be watched with smartphones.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, furthermore, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, still, therefore, thus, for instance, i feel, i think, such as, as a result, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 15.1003584229 119% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 58.0 43.0788530466 135% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 52.0 52.1666666667 100% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.0752688172 149% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2244.0 1977.66487455 113% => OK
No of words: 423.0 407.700716846 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.30496453901 4.8611393121 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.53508145475 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82283758862 2.67179642975 106% => OK
Unique words: 254.0 212.727598566 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.600472813239 0.524837075471 114% => OK
syllable_count: 685.8 618.680645161 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 15.0 9.59856630824 156% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 6.0 1.86738351254 321% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.2892410757 48.9658058833 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.2 100.406767564 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.15 20.6045352989 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.4 5.45110844103 172% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 11.8709677419 34% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 13.0 3.85842293907 337% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0816088208645 0.236089414692 35% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0264778084981 0.076458572812 35% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0308136800016 0.0737576698707 42% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.052096123148 0.150856017488 35% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00888454084068 0.0645574589148 14% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 11.7677419355 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 58.1214874552 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.1575268817 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.46 10.9000537634 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.27 8.01818996416 116% => OK
difficult_words: 123.0 86.8835125448 142% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 10.002688172 125% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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